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by classic06

person Violence
schedule January 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Okay so I know this makes me either slow or retarded but uh I just found out yesterday listening to all these radio interviews that Kelly is indeed a vegetarian. So I just wanted to congradulate you for incorporating that into the story. A... pony? Her parents got her a freaking pony. I WANT A PONY. That's so cute though. Carrie's parents and Kelly conspiring together. Aww, poor Carrie's getting picked on. I love that she was able to tell her sister about her and Kelly.
person greens28
schedule January 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Man, they are so good together. Glad that Carrie's parents are so supportative. The pony as a presennt was a great idea & Ace getting jealous is just too cute. u write them so romantic & very hot together. I am looking forward to your next update. Love it!!!!
person Mo56
schedule January 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
okay so i was suuuuuper happy to see this story was updated and i must say, it was worth the wait. even tho kelly and carrie didn't get to see each other, their phone calls were adorable and i loved carries give! i want a pony too! they should name it cally!! lol
schedule January 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It was so good to read that Kelly didn't shut Carrie out, and I was also glad to see that Carrie was trying to give Kelly space. I liked Carrie's reaction to Ashley bringing up the article, that she got the chance to express her first reaction, since she wouldn't have if Kelly had been around. Jeanne was wrong to say that Carrie hurts Kelly. I think Kelly should do an interview on her own to set the record straight. It sucks that they're being judged, but Jeanne's latest stunt could hurt their careers more than sharing some information about their relationship. I wouldn't be surprised if some (stupid) people didn't want to work with Kelly because Jeanne made her out to be so pliable, not to mention there are other bad things that could happen to Kelly because of it. It's pretty obvious how the article screwed Carrie, but it was still a good update :)
person greens28
schedule January 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What an awesome update.. Kelly's mom is so cruel for selling the false story-especially be making Kelly look like a victim & Carrie a predator.. Anyway, you are continuing to do a fantastic job with this fic-I don't know where U get all the fabolous ideas-but keep it up. I really am loving your work. Great job!!! Can't wait to read the next update...
person Violence
schedule January 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love the snuggles. LOL. Ashley says the greatest things. Jeanne strikes back part 2. Kelly does have an amazing set of eyes. That bit where Kelly and Carrie talked about the magazine article was quite sad/touching actually. Awwwwwwwwwwwww. Even when something so shitty is happening to them they still manage to be so damn cute. hahahaha, I think Kate should consider herself lucky.
person Mo56
schedule January 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
as much as parts of that chapter sucked because jeanne is a total witch, i loved it! i swear, these two girls are like a million percent supposed to be together!!
person Violence
schedule December 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lol, it seems you've been on a Carrie hating streak lately. There've been multiple times when I've wanted to smack her upside the head in both this story and love quotes. But I forgive her. The part where Kelly came to her sleep with her on the couch was cute as hell. And once again happy time was shattered by Jeanne. It was so worth it just to hear Kelly talk about how she eventually wants to marry and have kids with Carrie. Major awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww moment. Hopefully this is the last final time Jeanne leaves. For the sake of Kelly's emotional state I hope so.
person Mo56
schedule December 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
MERRY CHRISTMAS TO YOU TOO!! i loved this chapter! i'm totally sad for kelly that she had to do what she did...but its about time. jeanne is gonna be sorry. carrie is like the best girlfriend ever!
person sugar
schedule December 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
thank you for giving us an update today. it was really great :)

happy x-mas everyone!