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by classic06

schedule November 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Something tells me trouble is brewing...I'm still skeptical of Jeanne. It shall be interesting to see what happens when Carrie is not around. I do love the interactions between the girls. Duh, right? Anyway. Great update.
person Mo56
schedule November 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aw that was too cute. and boo to carries band for ignoring her. they're all insane!
person Arniow
schedule November 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I don't like Jeanne.. Do you think she'd dim it down if she knew about Carrie's band being so.. bleigh ?
schedule November 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ashley still has some of the best lines lol. Although, it would be funny to one time see Carrie actually do one the things Ashley jokes about doing, just to get in the last dig. I wouldn't be surprised if Jeanne had been like recording her convo with Carrie. Or maybe she's being a spy for Clive- okay that last one was just a weird random guess, but I think Jeanne took off to quickly for her not to be up to something. Carrie's decision to not tell Kelly about the exchange is so gonna come back on her, the girl really is blonde. Kelly was just so adorable in that last scene :)
schedule November 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It was nice to see Jason, Ashley and Carrie talking about the night they met, and of course it was cool that Carrie got to hear about how excited Kelly had been before she got to the hotel. I also liked that Carrie didn't back down when Jeanne wanted to be the one to go talk to Kelly. I'm really curious to see how Jeanne is going to act now after the talk with Kelly. I just hope for Jason's sake that she doesn't give him anymore details about anything lol.
person Mo56
schedule November 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! i totally love you! yes you, classic06!! you are SUPER SUPER DUPER amazing. that was an awesome chapter. i love that kelly had FINALLY set boundaries for jeanne and that she and carrie have (again) declared their undying love for one another. its too cute. also, i've gotta give props to ashley for being TOTALLY cool about this whole thing. she's like the bestest best friend ever! can't wait for the next update. kudos!
schedule October 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"A simple she bit me while we were making out would've sufficed." LOL!! I love the mix of humor in all the seriousness. Keep up the great work! *patiently awaits Clive's re-appearance* :oD

~*delilahstwin*~
schedule October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG, that was hot and hysterical all at once. Daaaaang, those bunks sound like fun. lol. I'm glad that Kelly told her mom. Well, not that she did it so bluntly, but that she stood up for herself and Carrie. I just hope Jeanne doesn't walk in on the "preshow ritual." lol.
person Mo56
schedule October 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
okay that was definitely the sexiest AND funniest chapter ever! i love this story!! thanks for the update!
schedule October 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome update. I'm sure Jeanne will find some way to interrupt the pre-show ritual, lmao. Ashley is awesome, that is all. When Carrie thanked Kelly, I found that funny for some reason. I have no idea why. Can Reba like kick Jeanne? Kelly is giving her mom a ton of leeway, but it was great that she told Jeanne the truth. She could have lied or have said it in a nicer way, but Jeanne hasn't been "playing" fair because of her need to pretend Carrie and Kelly are just really good friends. I really hope that Jason like takes her somewhere after the show so that she doesn't make Kelly feel guilty.