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by classic06

schedule October 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just started reading this the other day, and I'm absolutely loving this fanfic! I can't wait to read more!

BTW: I was just curious about the Clive/record company piece of the story. Did that piece not fit/work out after a while? I was surprised there wasn't a chapter or something about Clive's reaction to the situation, which would no doubt have been massive. It's just a thought, though. :o) -- I have to say, it was fun reading his character as a controlling slimeball. lol I'm sure Jeanne is way more interesting to write about, as that story has more complexity. I do prefer Clive as a smaller piece, however. I was just surprised there wasn't at least a section on his reaction. That's all. :o)

Okay, I'm rambling... Keep up the good work! I shall follow this one until you decide to end it.

~*delilahstwin*~
person Violence
schedule October 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh Jeanne, Jeanne, Jeanne. That woman is either in severe denial or she's crazy. Haha, she actually thinks Carrie sleeps in a bunk and doesn't sleep in the same bed as Kelly, that's funny. "It's not my fault waking up makes you horny." lol. That's one of the greatest lines ever. Then there's the usual dose of Kelly/Carrie that is just so damn cute. which means I fuckin love it. Lol, I love the whip and handcuff comments. Jeanne is definitely trying to slowly drive Carrie to insanity.
schedule October 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, Jeanne lasted a while what? Two days? That's pretty impressive for someone who got protesters to picket Kelly's entrance to a show. j/k I'm not saying that she is faking or anything, because obviously she's gonna be concerned for Kelly driving all night, though yeah it already happened lol. It's really entertaining how Carrie and Jeanne interact- talking around Kelly and the relationship. Great, great update, loved it.
person 70032
schedule October 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
once again, you've out done yourself. a masterful chapter that was! more, please. lol
schedule October 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OK, Jeanne asking about what goes on in their bedroom…awkward! Lol. You know, ding dongs and grapes, Kelly’s diet is hysterical. Oh, and yum on the sweet potato casserole. Haha. Great update. I’m still skeptical of Jeanne’s intentions, though…good update.
schedule October 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great update. It was fun to read Kelly and her mom's conversation at the restaurant. The way Jeanne acted then and at Kelly and Carrie's makes it seems like she's not really trying. The things that she got upset over weren't really about Kelly's sexuality, just about Kelly's vegetarianism and the other stuff. She also took every opportunity to try and stay away from Carrie. I think if she were really trying to come to terms with everything, she would make an effort with Carrie more than she has. That being said, I do kinda hope that Jeanne doesn't hurt Kelly. Kelly was pretty awesome with giving her mom so much leeway, though I liked that she and Carrie had their honest (and not honest lol) conversation at the end of the chapter.
person Mo56
schedule October 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ok let me start off by saying how completely thrilled i was to see an update on this story...it totally made my day. next, you are an effin GENIUS! i loooooved the part were kelly and her mom were at dinner and she totally talked-up carrie. and last, but not least, carrie is amazing to support kelly wanting a relationship with her mom but still being cautious of her mothers intentions. HIGH FIVE for chapter 74!!! can't wait for chapter 75...but that's what they all say, right?
person ClarkWoodFan
schedule October 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome update. I liked that Kelly was open and honest about Carrie with her mom. Like someone else said, if she's gonna accept them, she's gonna have to see them together completely. I loved Kelly's comment that Carrie was such an important part of her life. So cute. For the record, I'm with Carrie. I'm not really buying Jeanne's nice act. (I think it's all an act...) I just hope Kelly doesn't get her heart broken again. Oh, and "River Hawks" eh? (My brain + football talk with ClarkWood = visual of CU in a cheerleader outfit. So thanks for that.) LOL.
person Anon
schedule October 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So... Is Jeanne really plotting against them? 'Cause, personally, I agree with Carrie.. I don't trust her..
person sueage
schedule October 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i seriously have the worst feeling when it comes to jeanne...i just don't buy the sudden turnaround. but at the same time it does seem like she is trying and that she is being honest with her uncomfortable reactions...so i dunno...guess we will see, tho. i just hope i'm wrong and jeanne is for real and not setting them up for something even worse than the pictures...i'm crossing my fingers.

on a lighter note, i love how supportive carrie is being, but also that she isn't completely holding back with kelly. and i am glad they didn't try and hide anything about their relationship or that they live together and sleep in the same bed just for jeanne's sake. she needs to see it if she is ever gonnna accept it. and they are just so freakin adorable together...

and you know...it's your fault in the first place that anyone gets impatient for updates...the story is just too damn good not to wanna know what happens next. if you weren't brilliant this story wouldn't be so addicting and no one would be impatient. and don't blush ;-) lol. jk.