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for Bathtub?

by silk

schedule September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
How cruel of you to leave us all hanging like this :(
please update soon before i die
schedule September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY!! I can't wait!
schedule September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Shit this is awesome!
C'mon, post the last part!
Give us the climax!
schedule August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
u tease
person darkstorm888
schedule August 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
MORE DAMMIT!
hehe nice job so far
person Smooshy
schedule August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Bath salts. That made me giggle.
schedule August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome. I wondered where the story had gone. lol.
schedule August 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
update? yes
schedule August 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aw, that was so sweet.
schedule August 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's really good, keep it up.

It was funny cause the first time i read this part :

" She quickly ran to the front door and opened it.

“What?”

“Hey, I need to use your… bathroom” Gerard said as he rushed right past Jera.

Jera’s house wasn’t big so Gerard had no problem seeing the bathroom right in front of him.

“What’s with the backpack?” she asked.

Gerard’s muffled voice from behind the bathroom door answered back, “uh, my…for my comic books.” "

I thought he was actually going to use the bathroom, thats why he brought the comic books, in case he took a long time.

Hahahaha

:)