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by GentooNiXGeek

schedule November 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY! Thank you so much, my baby!

I love you love you love you!
person Sam
schedule August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Are Bam and Ville gonna get mad?
person hallie66
schedule August 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well well, Good work. I like the way the character's speech flows. Good rhythm. I look forward to the rest of the story.
person anestasia
schedule August 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ahhh i live in millville so weird to see it in a fan fic
person Sam
schedule August 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! It's so cute!
person Pyra
schedule August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hahahah poor poor Trish, hahahha how funny would that be if she walked in on them! Anyways I like it so far, but I would like some other details to their relationship, nothin fancy, ya know they both have ego's and of course trying to keep their relationship secret will be hard, geez I wonder what Ville would do if someone tried to come onto Bam? Bam would prolly laugh it off, but Ville is harder to read. Hmmmmmmm....Just some ideas if you get stummped.
xoxoxoxo
Pyra
schedule August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
interesting start, update soon so i can find out what happens next xx
person Pyra
schedule August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Didn't log in. Opps. Well I like every story with Ville and Bammie, they are together? I hope? Well I can't wait for Bammie to beat the shit outta this kid, then Ville can burn him with his cigaretts! Hee! ^.^ More soon please!