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by UtsukushiiAiji

person visva
schedule May 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I usually don't start reading a story with this much bands and pairings I don't know well, but I was so happy I read this after all!
I fell in love with this almost instantly, moreover, I fell in love with Kirito/Aiji, even though Pierrot is rather unfamiliar to me (only heard about 10 songs and so on), but I loved the characters so much, especially Aiji's personality you described in such a way!
Even though this was long I think it wasn't too long, actually I liked to get hooked up in the text and just read and read and read it.
I'm quite picky about stories, so I know when it's a good story, and this truly was. It made me smile couple of times and I felt so anxious about reading more, to get to know what was going to happen to all of them -and I must say, I harly ever feel that. This was one piece of art, thank you for writing it and sharing it.

Oh, and I noticed you said in your profile that you'd might want to change e-mail with someone with similiar interests, and I happen to share atleast some of them, like yaoi and BDSM (underline this one), some musical interests, and I most definitely enjoyed what I've read. So if you have any interest, feel free to send me e-mail, ( ondskap@luukku.com ).

-visva
person Dark Avenger
schedule September 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, part 3c was... shocking to say the least. I do hope you will continue with this and consider my offer further.

~Dark Avenger
person Anon
schedule September 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
By the way, you have two parts labeled 3b.
person Alexandra
schedule September 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yes, they're both 3b in my mind. I initially just left them as sidestories with titles, but decided if I was going to butcher it up into "a, b, c", that's how it would have to go. There will also be another 3c, which will be Pierrot's take on the party. Suggestions for a better lettering system are welcome~

And thank you Dark Avenger for your kind words :)
person Dark Avenger
schedule August 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 3b.
Wow, that was... entertaining on so many levels. *laughs* I'll read more when I get a chance again. Your chapters are so long, it's hard to find time to read on in only one sitting, but I occasionally manage to find the time.

~Dark Avenger