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The end of this had me in stitches. Thanks :)

“Didn’t Ritchie tell ya, we’re having a bedroom practice today, and I’m gonna cook us all a roast. Yorkshire puds and all!” he beamed and headed for the kitchen."

This one has hope. ^^ I like hope.... my mind can
finish it off in a very nice way..... but anyway....
Ritchie playing with Ian's head, yes, I can see this,
ritchie and the headfuck. The beginning is so hot,
just a tantalising glimpse of what we wish would
happen.... I think the tarantula is an excellent word
to connect with ritchie.... black and with suede like
legs..... hehehe

Poor ian, he's so confused from Ritchie's behaviour.
Does it mean this or does it mean that and the man in
black isn't going to tell him till the end and even
here.... he could turn it all round again after the
story finishes and probably will.

"What am I gonna do with you, Ian?"

"Kiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiss me" well that's how I see it. I
do like the way you leave your stories open to
interpretation. Nothing is final as in relationships,
there isn't a finishing point.

Well anyway, that's my two pence worth, so I hope you
will write more. Look forward to it.

Dbarney