rate_review Reviews

Now it's sort of hard for me to review because it ends
so sadly, (into the fire) but I realise that's how you
wanted it and my little happy fantasies of the two of
them skipping off into the sunset, ain't going to come
into play, so.....

Well I think it's very well written. I love the german
bit at the beginning and I love the line about no
knowing how to lie in german. I think you got
ritchie's arseholeyness through rather well, ^^ even
though I do love him I think I would have killed him
had I known him.... he reminds me bit of a friend I
had once..... no longer. Ritchie is such a tormented
soul, I think he would agree.

The way you described David coverdale hits the mark
for me, but then I'm not his biggest fan.... (this
might have something to do with robert plant..... ) I
can see ritchie feeling and acting just like this.

Ian is like a labrador in this, albeit a drunk one ^^
The way he nuzzles up to ritchie.... and Ritchie
really is a bit of a bastard. True to life, but their
affection for each other, at least at this part, is
wonderful and the ending..... so sad... so damn sad,
very well done, perfect really or the sense of loss
and their situation.... but so sad. ;_; anyway, my
review was long winded and warbling..... like ian.
(grin)