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I really like this. I'd like to see more :3.

I've been wanting to read a story like this for quite a while and while it wasn't amazing (there were typos, the dialogue was awkward at times, and it was overall too violent for me) I would love for you to continue this. I, personally, would enjoy it so much more if good!William was forced to enjoy it the next time. More humiliating that way, you know?

<3

really nice story, please make more to it...how creative and naughty of you to come up with this.

That was really good...and hot in a kinda creepy way lol I think you should definitely continue! And let me know if you need help with posting chapters :)

~LilyRose~

you are a good story teller! but please don't put poor william through any more of will's torment! lol