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for A Child's Mind Is A Fasinating Thing

by slayya

schedule December 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh man... Sucky! If only Gerard hadn't been gagged, that recording's not going to hold up in a court.

Hey, e-mail me sometime would you?
schedule April 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooo *dun dun dun!* Good add!
schedule April 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay, no more sugar for you honey. But, hey, good add! Love it.
person Luci
schedule April 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a really intriguing story. I want to just hug Gee.

I can't wait for more. :)
schedule March 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap! I dunno, I think it works the way it is.
person CLS89
schedule March 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Make ray less like a girl. He wouldn’t cover his mouth, that’s too girly. What he would probably do is:

I starred for a moment before rubbing my eyes and turning away, muttering a curse before looking back at Frank and Bob. "You can’t be fucking serious" they just starred at me "You are holy fucking crap!"

Something like that lol. U can use that if you want.
person CL
schedule February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW! update soon, not i want to know what happens next. im fucing tired too lol. gunna get back to bed. kinda interesting to think gerard as a kid. keep it up
schedule February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Eep! Run Mikey run! Kick him in the nuts and run!
schedule February 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You got it nailed honey, that's how it'd go. Nice work sweetheart.
person Nighteh
schedule January 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh man, I was so happy once I saw that this had been updated.
And the chapter itself!
I'm so glad he's outta that damn place. Never let him go back please. ;_; They'd probably kick his ass even worse now.
I think this is really gonna get good now, though, with the other band members there to see their reactions to it, and possibly even their parents... don't know if you'll include them, though. ;3

But either way, can't wait for more!