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for As The World Falls Down

by VioletxTwilight

person exelon
schedule January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
mmm, interestin AU for Ville. anyway, i like it and i want more. so pick up your pen and start scribbling a new chapter. i'm waiting!!!
schedule November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG...

I loved loved loved loved loved this.

Please write more!

And take Jareth back. He's at least good eye candy.
schedule November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was HOT! Please update soon!
schedule November 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, you are a cruel woman. Update, please!
schedule November 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this so much!

I never understood the riddle myself.

Good job.
schedule November 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please update again soon, I can't wait.
schedule November 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
all right, i finally gave this story a chance and i love it! although the bam-fairy is a little disturbing..... update soon?
schedule October 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have to agree that "I'm a pervert and your very beautiful sweetheart, do I need more of a reason?" is an awesome line. I was also particularly fond of,

"I'm going to make your sister a woman."
"Cookie!"

I like your sense of humor. Keep it up!
schedule October 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this more with every chapter! Your take on this just fascinates me to no end.

And Jareth has prettier legs than I do. It hardly seems fair. :(

Bam is the best fairy ever. I love you.
schedule October 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think it's spelled oubliette if that's what you're going for.

I like it so far, the changes are interesting. However, I think you might want to consider getting a beta reader. Just a suggestion. I should take my own advice, ha ha!