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March 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved every min. of this!
I await the next part with baited breath.
5 stars. ^_^
I await the next part with baited breath.
5 stars. ^_^
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August 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Heyyyy I really like this story! I am not normally a fan of fics with female OCs but I really like how this one is written, and I especially like how well you've portrayed Miyavi's personality. I'm worried by the sad beginning that this will have an unhappy ending... I hope not! I'm really enjoying the romance in this so I'm liking how it's going and I hope you'll have an update ready for us soon :3
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May 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!!!!!! PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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March 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like your story so much!for the first time miyavi seems real and not a stupid 2 years old or an emo...
please continue it!it's so good..
quoting myv: "please,please ne..onegai!"
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please continue it!it's so good..
quoting myv: "please,please ne..onegai!"
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January 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I REALLY love this story! It beautiful, I love how you put the character into a position as to where one can imagine themselves in the role of the main character. AND MIYAVI! WOW...I love how you write him, it seems like him, so cocky, and yet, so caring at the same time. Please write more?
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December 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This is the one of the best Miyavi stories I've ever read. I hope you continue it, I'm looking forward to reading more. :)
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December 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please, tell me that you have more? it is really well written and though I know what's going to happen, I still want to read it. onegaishimasu!
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November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I sat and read this through from the beginning and love it.
It's a different route than normal when it comes to fan fiction and I find it quite refreshing.
You have a great ability to use your vocabulary to your advantage, even though there are a few mistakes there isn't anything bad enough to really disrupt the flow of the story.
I think you have built some very strong characters here and it would be a shame for them to be abandoned.
I look forward to the next update :)
It's a different route than normal when it comes to fan fiction and I find it quite refreshing.
You have a great ability to use your vocabulary to your advantage, even though there are a few mistakes there isn't anything bad enough to really disrupt the flow of the story.
I think you have built some very strong characters here and it would be a shame for them to be abandoned.
I look forward to the next update :)
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November 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear... uh.
Throughout reading these three fine, fine chapters, I have felt very lonely and sad and nervous. In the beginning it's really obvious that she feels like she'll never be in Miyavi's presence again, that she did something to royally screw up all of her chances with him.
I think the story should go it's paces, and then turn a 180 and she should run into him. And they should be in love and be happy, other wise this story is going to effing kill me. ^_^;;
Throughout reading these three fine, fine chapters, I have felt very lonely and sad and nervous. In the beginning it's really obvious that she feels like she'll never be in Miyavi's presence again, that she did something to royally screw up all of her chances with him.
I think the story should go it's paces, and then turn a 180 and she should run into him. And they should be in love and be happy, other wise this story is going to effing kill me. ^_^;;
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November 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nicely done but I still hate mary sues. they're so wrong.