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I really enjoyed the last few updates. I wish I'd had the time to comment on them individually, but they are all great. I really enjoyed the one where Carrie buckled under Clive's talk once Kelly left. Plus, I think it's adorable that they're both so hesitant to go for it with each other, though they are doing cute date-like things with each other. One thing I really want to comment on, is that I thought it was really interesting that Kelly is adept at talking to the interviewers, and Carrie isn't, and not just because it makes it like a ying yang thing between them :) I do have a question, why does Carrie kiss Kelly's forehead in public? Did I miss something? I mean I'm assuming it's because like when they do kiss, even if it's on the cheek, that's between them, am I wrong? One last thing, I really like that we're getting to see that although Carrie did the 'party girl' thing, sort of, that she is making little comments about how she didn't like this or that about that lifestyle. I think it gives her more layers. I can't wait for the next update.

I haven't been checking the site latelly, because classes started this week & I have been so busy....but I was happy that I signed on & saw that my favorite fan fic writer updated my fav. fics. Great job-as always. This last chapter was so cute & they R really starting to fall for each other. Gonna go read your other fic now-Thanks alot.

Really sweet chapter. They're first date is bound to have something bad happen because of Clive probably. Update soon please.

YES, YES, YES! Finally the first kiss.

Great twist-I didn't see that one w/Clive coming at all. I am still hooked. Great Job...

Glad 2 see that U R back. Nice update & the fic just keeps getting better & more interesting w/ each new chapter. I like the way that U R showing that the girls R just gradually getting closer & closer & R not rushing things. Awesome as always...

This is absolutly an amazing story. Keep up the goos work. I love it. Along with your other work. Both are fanastic.

O.K. I have read both fic updates & can't decide which I like best. I will just have to call it a draw. I think it is so cute how they are both falling in love with each other & they just don't see it yet-but others are starting too. Very good update. Thanks.

I have really enjoyed your story so far keep up the good work.

Wow-So glad U are back w/ an update. I think it was my favorite chapter so far. They were so cute & funny together. I love how Carrie has opened up to Kelly. The little text messages were so cute & sexy. I was smiling the whole time I was reading it. Thanks. I love it. U ROCK!!!!