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for Something In My Head

by Need2ScreamNow

person Zippo Mother Lover
schedule December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O_______________O

I promise to review later, deary.

When I can actually form coherent thoughts.
person Zippo Mother Lover
schedule December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I do beleive a threesome is in order.

Followed quickly by a dirty orgy.

Yes/yes?

Or maybe not. D:

But Syn is so hot, and he's been waiting on Zacky fo liek, evar!

And Matt's so adorable. And sexy.

*droool*
schedule December 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Omg Im so loving this. I stayed away for a few days so Id have more chapters to read. Yr story is like crack to me. And Zacky on his meds - Awesome.
I couldnt stop laughing about the colors. And what's the deal with corpseman? That thing is starting to freak me out.
person Zippo Mother Lover
schedule December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O___O

Damn.

If I would've had that nightmare for the past three years, well. I would have done gone and offed myself by now.

I mean, once is fine. But *three years*? Poor Zackyyyy!

At least that mystery is solved, though.

Ah, yes! Updates! I loved reading these two chapters, they've really helped clean up a lot of questions I had.

So, what have you got planned for next chapter I wonder, hmm? *wink~*
schedule December 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! You updated.
*Does Happy Dance*
Keep It Coming.
I wanna know what happens on the bus.
person Zippo Mother Lover
schedule December 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
-A/N: I would like to give a very special thanks to ‘Zippo Mother Lover’ for not only pointing out some grammar and formatting mistakes I made a couple chapters ago, but also for his/her tips on my sex scene and Zacky's last name, Thank you ^_^ that was really helpful!-

WAAAAAAH! I was mentioned! Huzzahhhh!

Tis a she, luv. Tis I is a she. Muaha.

I'm so happy I helped. I love helping!!! Off to read the story now, luv. <3

Eeeep!
person Zippo Mother Lover
schedule December 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ehhh?

Man, this is confusing! Hopefully there shall be clarification in the next few chaps? It's wonderful, but I'm going to have to read it over again once I figure out who's talking in each section. I have my suspicions, buuut...

Keep it comin', dear! Iz makin meh happy that you update with good stuff so quick!
person Zippo Mother Lover
schedule December 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Zachary James Baker - Just for future reference, luv! *wink~* I much prefer Vengeance mehself, but...

Anyways, nice new chapter. I rolled out of my seat laughing when Zachary started sneaking about. Your grammar was magnificent in this chapter, and the voice are hilarious as usual! I'm glad to see them out of the hospital, as I'm sure are the rest of the bandmates. Matt's so adorably attached to Zach, you can just sense that underlying friendship between them in your story- that's another thing most writers just leave lacking. Please contiue on with this story, I absolutely love it deary!

I'm planning on reviewing the next chapters as well- wouldn't miss it for the world. But the little teasers up at the top, the ones with all of the sex? They're evil. D: I was so sad to see how unfulfilling they were- I can't wait to read the full ones instead!

And are Syn and Zacky EVER going to finish what they started?

Oiya, so many questions... Answer them, pleaseee?

schedule December 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This just keeps getting better and better. I love it.
And I love that you keep this updated.I Hate getting into a story just to find out the author's abandoned it.
person Amazin'grace
schedule December 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
TOTALLY cannot wait for more. this is soooo great! can't wait to see what happens next!