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Hot damn. I get on and there're FOUR new chappies!

Made my damned day, I'll tell you that much.

Yeah. This story is pretty much the best I'm reading right now. It's the first one I check for updates when I get on, so. Your writing style is great, the way you add these little voices. They crack me right the hell up, I swear.

Um. I was really surprised about the whole hospital thing, but I can't say I'll miss it. That heart monitor really pissed me off in Chapter Seven. Damn the nurses and their adherence to their jobs I say.

But yes. This story is great. I notice that you've started making fewer errors (grammatical and formatting) as the story progresses and grows larger, but that's the only thing wrong with this and even that isn't too big a deal.

I really hope to see more of this story, and I plan on reading it all the way through!!!!!

Im Loving this story,Im addicted to it.
Cant wait to read more.

AMAZING.

This story is by far the best I've seen for the A7X fandom so far. I love Zacky's little voices...

More, or I shall die. Please?

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