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April 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
HOT!!!!!! UPDATE SOON CUZ I LOVE THIS FIC!!! SO FUCKING HOT!!!!!!!!!1
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January 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well now, the concept of this story seems eerie familiar... ;-) Somehow I've read almost every detail of this story in your other stories - it's still nice, it just lacks some new components to spice things up (aside from the different characters). I know you said in a response to an other review that you're just having fun and you're open to suggestions. The problem is, I'm not a writer so I don't really know what to tell you how to "make it better"... All I can do is point out the seemingly obvious and hope that you don't see it as overly harsh critic. Thanks for posting the story, though!
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January 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good story. like the idea of it.. just not beth lol but the story is awsome just liek your mickie story keep up the good work