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December 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
beside not being able to read chapter 12 as it isn't ther i seem to sense something familiar with this fic... wounder why...
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November 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hey your story is great i really love it
i'am lookign forward to see what happens nexts but mmm chapter 12 isnt there jeje
keep on writting it is great it really is
Bye
i'am lookign forward to see what happens nexts but mmm chapter 12 isnt there jeje
keep on writting it is great it really is
Bye
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September 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Eh? Wh-what just happened? Ten minutes ago I had seven chapters to go, now I got no more?! This is an outrage! I demand an update and soon!
Even if I did just get into this band two hours ago, I love this story and really want to see more of it. Please, I'm begging! If you don't update soon, I will shoot you.
~*Peace*~
^^ Auska.
Even if I did just get into this band two hours ago, I love this story and really want to see more of it. Please, I'm begging! If you don't update soon, I will shoot you.
~*Peace*~
^^ Auska.
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August 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay, you updated again, thank God, hehe! About the typos and such, it's cool (it's not the end of the world I mean), as long as you're doing something about them, that is!
Okay, those reasons make a lot of sense, I've to say, very realistic! Kudos, lol!
Okay, you were busy with your life, now that's perfectly understandable, hehe, trust me!
On with the review; great chapter, I liked it! I really liked the bit in the beginning when Bill's reflecting about "things" and whatnot, very nicely done! But the rest was also great, I just happened to like the Bill part the best, oh well!
However I do have something to say about all those weird symbols, (which where found scattered throughout the whole chapter), why where they there?!
Just wondering though, because it kind of made the whole reading experience a bit more difficult and whatnot, I mean; as in understanding who said what and so on. Maybe if you have time, you could re-edit this chapter, you know try to fix it!
This is just a tip, therefore it's not a must but I'm sure if you actually did it, it'd make a whole difference, especially a lot more easier to read and whatnot!
And yeah, this chapter was indeed short but it was a good one nonetheless, so never mind that too much, that is, hehe!
In this chapter's AN, you mentioned that you wrote this chapter quite some time ago, and I guess what I am trying to say or ask is; I hope you re-read every chapter before you post them, because that's a very good way to spot typos and so on, so one can/could fix them before one post them on the net for example!
I was merely thinking of all the weird symbols throughout this chapter, that's all!
Okay, so that's more than enough of feedback or constructive criticism for one chapter I think, so I'll stop now, hehe!
And when I read the part when they (the police) gave Tom & Company the so called bad news, I couldn't help but feel, "Bill can't be dead because Tom would so be able to feel it or sense it," and then Tom himself thought about that as well and I was like; "Yay"!
Awesome but is it really smart of Tom go by himself and try to find Bill, maybe he's going to need help?!
Oh, well, I'm sure he'll think of something right?! Because he's a smart boy!
I cannot wait to read more, to find out what Bill is going to do and if Tom will get closer to finding him? Therefore please update soon!
Okay, those reasons make a lot of sense, I've to say, very realistic! Kudos, lol!
Okay, you were busy with your life, now that's perfectly understandable, hehe, trust me!
On with the review; great chapter, I liked it! I really liked the bit in the beginning when Bill's reflecting about "things" and whatnot, very nicely done! But the rest was also great, I just happened to like the Bill part the best, oh well!
However I do have something to say about all those weird symbols, (which where found scattered throughout the whole chapter), why where they there?!
Just wondering though, because it kind of made the whole reading experience a bit more difficult and whatnot, I mean; as in understanding who said what and so on. Maybe if you have time, you could re-edit this chapter, you know try to fix it!
This is just a tip, therefore it's not a must but I'm sure if you actually did it, it'd make a whole difference, especially a lot more easier to read and whatnot!
And yeah, this chapter was indeed short but it was a good one nonetheless, so never mind that too much, that is, hehe!
In this chapter's AN, you mentioned that you wrote this chapter quite some time ago, and I guess what I am trying to say or ask is; I hope you re-read every chapter before you post them, because that's a very good way to spot typos and so on, so one can/could fix them before one post them on the net for example!
I was merely thinking of all the weird symbols throughout this chapter, that's all!
Okay, so that's more than enough of feedback or constructive criticism for one chapter I think, so I'll stop now, hehe!
And when I read the part when they (the police) gave Tom & Company the so called bad news, I couldn't help but feel, "Bill can't be dead because Tom would so be able to feel it or sense it," and then Tom himself thought about that as well and I was like; "Yay"!
Awesome but is it really smart of Tom go by himself and try to find Bill, maybe he's going to need help?!
Oh, well, I'm sure he'll think of something right?! Because he's a smart boy!
I cannot wait to read more, to find out what Bill is going to do and if Tom will get closer to finding him? Therefore please update soon!
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August 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What an awesome story you've got here, I really like it!
The plot is great and the character portrayal is also great, as well as the interaction between everyone! Good job! The fic is also quite well written apart from a few typos, which I spotted throughout the entire story, oh well...no real harm done, so never mind, I guess!
Even though I like the plot I cannot help but think its a bit strange perhaps that Bill just decides to run away like that, oh well, I still love it though, feel free to ignore me, laughs!
So I saw that you've written up to 14 chapters (which you stated in the AN at the end of chapter 9), nice but it has been quite a long time since you updated, hmm, why is that, pray tell?!
I'd love to read the rest, to see if they ever get to see each other again, so please continue and please update soon...
The plot is great and the character portrayal is also great, as well as the interaction between everyone! Good job! The fic is also quite well written apart from a few typos, which I spotted throughout the entire story, oh well...no real harm done, so never mind, I guess!
Even though I like the plot I cannot help but think its a bit strange perhaps that Bill just decides to run away like that, oh well, I still love it though, feel free to ignore me, laughs!
So I saw that you've written up to 14 chapters (which you stated in the AN at the end of chapter 9), nice but it has been quite a long time since you updated, hmm, why is that, pray tell?!
I'd love to read the rest, to see if they ever get to see each other again, so please continue and please update soon...
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March 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yaaay another update!
Poor Bill he lost the picture TT
I liked the ofc you created to help him, usually I dislike original characters because they tend to be too perfect but this one was cool
Keep up the good work and congrats
Merricko
Poor Bill he lost the picture TT
I liked the ofc you created to help him, usually I dislike original characters because they tend to be too perfect but this one was cool
Keep up the good work and congrats
Merricko
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March 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ok so I'm on chapter 6, and I think this is really really compelling!! I'm dying to find out what happens to Bill and if Tom will ever find him again! *holds breath and goes to next chapter* ^_^
v.v. good *_*
v.v. good *_*
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March 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AAAH! Bill go get your one true love! haha this was really good, I absolutely loved the part where Bill is talking and he doesnt realize the phone is ringing Tom's phone and when Tom hears the message ^_^ ooh and the gustav/georg sleeping intimately together was cool too!!
waiting for more!
waiting for more!
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March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ow I liked it alot!!!
Poor Bill he must be suffering so much...
Hoping that you continue quickly, congrats
Merricko
Poor Bill he must be suffering so much...
Hoping that you continue quickly, congrats
Merricko
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March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
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WOW COOL
Yeaaaah now that scene was so cute seen by Tom's side (cause Bill's POV shows how kicked is as was xD)
Can't believe you could update today, and two chapters!!! Thank you so much
Merricko
WOW COOL
Yeaaaah now that scene was so cute seen by Tom's side (cause Bill's POV shows how kicked is as was xD)
Can't believe you could update today, and two chapters!!! Thank you so much
Merricko