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person Molly
schedule July 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I've just found your writings, but frankly, this is the best X Japan fic I've ever read, and I'm not exaggerating! It ripped my heart out, but I enjoyed every moment of it, so please continue? I can't die without knowing what happens with these two!! Plus I'd like to thank you for giving Heath spotlight, he is my favourite member but sadly he's so underrated :(
schedule April 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
:D Ah! I know I commented before, but I had a brain fart and forgot my log in, soo.. I just love this story, its so full of emotion and you had me at the point where Heath was going to pull out of X... ahhhh. <3 I hope there is a update soon, if your still continuing it that is.
person shura
schedule September 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yoshiki said something he should't have,
yes he was hurt, but that don't justify his words
And Heath keeps hurting himself
;_____; this chap is so intense
person -mystery-
schedule September 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You're story is very moving. I like the fact that it's not all pure sex. There is actually a story here unfolding and playing out before us and it's filled with mixed emotions and intense situations. You also make the characters feel human in this way, with strengths and weaknesses. Even if a person isn't a japanese rock star you can still relate to this. On the other hand though the sex scenes that you do paint for us are really well done. You don't allow it to be trashy at all or if it is its for a good reason [like with Yosh and the chick who he was letting suck him off] it all becomes a piece of the story a device for the unfolding of it. It's these scenes [the sex scenes] that the readers are coming to look for but its the story that keeps them coming back [no pun intended].
I am really glad though that Heath and Yoshiki are staying together and working things out, but i get this feeling that it's not all perfect now just cause everything is out in the open. i'll look forward to your next chapter!
person gummy-fan
schedule July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic, it's really awesome,I hope you continue
and I like how you writte.
person shura
schedule July 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love your fic.
It's one of the best and well write fics I've ever read,OMG
I hope you continue it,please please please
<3take care
person Kurai
schedule June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow.. I love the story.. The last chap you wrote... Holy crap! I'm soo waiting for the next one >.< I wanna read that baby as soon as its out! Good work though and hope to see more or it!
person Kuragari
schedule June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
O.M.G. you said you were gonna be nasty and torture the both of them but I wasn't prepared!!! HIDE!!!!!! I thought it was Pata, perhaps.. but HIDE!!! OO Wuah that's completely unexpected!!! And the moment he's chosen to tell him couldn't be any more inappropriate.. both drunk and emotional as hell, I mean, Yoshiki had just been about to fucking RAPE him!!!!! I don't want to know what's coming next >.< (okay, in fact.. you know I DOOO!! *dies* xD)
The scenery has got a great athmosphere too OO you can FEEL the overflowing emotions OO
And I totally shouldn't have read it before I went to work xDD"
To the frosting of my Yaoi X Japan love birthday cake I have two words to say: MY PRECIOUSSSSSSSSS!!!!! *grabs it and moves quickly into a dark corner and bites everyone who dares to get too close* *thinks a moment and adds: except for 5 special persons.. plus the awesome author* xDD ;P
person Kuragari
schedule June 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
:3 1 chapter for each decade, eh?? Somehow.. I wish I was 100.. ^o^ ;PP
Awww *-* can I just repeat my last review?? The part about you being aweseome and poor Heath??? And add.. OMFG I CAN'T GET THAT IMAGE OF YOSHIKI OUT OF MY HEAD!!!!!!! xDDD"
You know this is the most evil cliffhanger I've ever seen! LOL I'm dying to READ the next chapter *starts hitting the refresh button every 10 seconds* x.x
AAAAAAAHHHHHHH I LOVE YOUR STORY AND EVERYONE WHO DOESN'T IS A LOSER!!!!! ;PPP (well.. except for, let's say, 5 very special ppl?? xDD)
person Uschi
schedule June 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wuaaaah YOU'RE BEYOND AWESOMEEEE!!!!! *bows repeatedly while doing super secret X handshake* Awwwww~~ getting old is not that bad at all.. *in love with b-day present* <3 ^^
Poor Heath!!! It surely is going to freak him out to see Yo-chan with a woman all night long oO" (freaking ME out, too LOL) but who knows what it's good for ;))
xD hide's interesting wardrobe, you say it ^^ but who could imagine him dressed up in a fancy black-and-white!!! ^^ With shoulder pads OMG xD
As to the waiting, well patience is not exactly what I'm good at LOL - but I know it's TOTALLY worth it!! ;) And of course your amazing project for the BoL comes first!! Make it perfect! *cheers* :D
(impatiently waiting for the next chapter tho ;P)
Hugz, Uschi~