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by clandestinecassie

schedule October 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww...poor Spencer...*sniff*
schedule October 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for that short sneak peak into Ryan and Brendon's past sex life. It was short, but it was hot nonetheless.

This wasn't an overly heavy chapter, but for some reason, it pulled at my heartstrings. Actually, I feel like my heart was ripped out of my chest and is beating in my hand. Weird, huh?

But please do update soon! Like Brendon, I'm wondering if Ryan will finally get better myself. Much as I love the fact that Nate is good to Brendon, I still think Ryan will be better for our protagonist. =)

Oh...and will Gabe and Bill ever get it on? Hehehe...=P
schedule September 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm speechless...and that doesn't happen to me often, let me tell you. I will say this, though: PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I want to find out if Brendon will see Pete again and if he'll be able to get clean. And of course, Ryan...what's going to happen to my Ryan? Will he really get better?

Oh, and yes...the man-sex! More of that please! Maybe Brenny recounting his bed moments with Ryan when the latter was still normal? That is sooo gonna be hot! (Basically, I'm asking for some bed action between Brendon and Ryan =P).

Please, please update soon! =)
person flame-demon
schedule September 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon! I have fallen in love with your story and I would be really sad if I don't find out how the story ends. =)
schedule September 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay, Capitals for the win!!

Once again, you have provided your loyal readers with more great chapters. Nice.

This, unfortunately, has to be a short review, as I am pressed for time. I stayed up later than I should just to read the two latest chapters. I did it out of love; love for the story, the characters, the real people they are based off of, and of course, you for creating this awesome story.

I don't really have anything to say about the chapters, only that I'm a little curious as to whats going on with Spencer and Ryan. I feel that they have been left out lately. Have you thought of writing the story in Spencer's point of view?? I think a different take on the events would be interesting.

Also, I think it's awesome that you are setting a goal for yourself. It's hard to make them and stick to it. So good luck, I'll be checking back every couple of weeks for new chapters.

Lots of love,
Cute but Psycho.
person Ierosbabe
schedule August 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG UPDATES!!!!

I am so happy right now I thought you weren't goin to update again...which I know is a bit dramatic since it was only like 2 weeks...lol!
Anyways brill chaps and YAY PETES BACK....I cant believe Brendon is going back to drugs to keep himself from cheating with Pete!
I love Nate but seriously Brenny Pete Action is HOT!!

More sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon Please!!!

xxx
schedule August 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW.
You have to continue i have so many unanswered questions!
Update soon, youre doing great!
schedule August 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aw, laaame. I don't want Bren to go back to Pete. He's got such a good relationship with Nate. I mean, come one, their relationship survived porn and drugs!! And now Bren takes one look at Pete again and he's just going to throw all that away (especially since he knows that Pete is never going to leave Patrick)?? Pete should know better as well. Why are the cute ones always so stupid??

Anyways, I still wanna know what is going to happen next.
Cute but Psycho.
schedule August 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, I didn't see that coming. Pete is back. He better not screw things up with Bren and Nate (though the smexing that they did when they were both high out of their minds was hawt). And they are both clean now, so the plot thickens. Oh noes!!

And you drop hints that Ryan is slowly getting better (not a lot, mind you, but he does seem to be learning things, right??). That makes me happy. And Spencer is so good for him too. I like him living with Bren and Ryan, but it still makes me a little scared that Jon could catch Spence there at any moment and go crazy abusive on them all. I think I would cry if that happens.

Update soon, ok??
Cute but Psycho.
person Ierosbabe
schedule July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I need more like NOW...ok so Im impatient but bren is considering being in a porn movie and a girls got needs!!!
Ok my last comment was anonymous...whats up with that???
Anyways.....PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE put me outta my misery!!!!