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May 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, another great chapter. And so soon after I reviewed too. You must love me. Haha.
Well, I'm glad to see that Pete is doing ok and is going to be getting help. I'm not a big fan of the real guy, but I don't hate him either, so it's all good. Also, it would probably make me more sad if something happened to the character, because then Bren would also be really sad. But it's good that Bren is starting (or at least trying) to move on.
And I think I forgot to mention in the other review that I like reading about Ryan in the past. I dunno, I think it's because I have a soft spot for him, and his condition in your story only makes it bigger and more full of fluff for the boy. And he seems (to me, at least) that he's still a somewhat undeveloped character. But that might be only because of his mental status. I still love his character lots and humbly request to see more of him. But whatever, you're the author, not me.
And don't worry so much about not using capitals so much. Yeah, it annoys me, but I'm still like hella addicted to this story, so you're not going to lose a reader over it. And I've kinda gotten used to it after reading seventeen chapters with no caps.
Is it just me, or do my reviews seem really long and ranty??
I'll keep checking back for the next chapter.
Cute bu Psycho.
Well, I'm glad to see that Pete is doing ok and is going to be getting help. I'm not a big fan of the real guy, but I don't hate him either, so it's all good. Also, it would probably make me more sad if something happened to the character, because then Bren would also be really sad. But it's good that Bren is starting (or at least trying) to move on.
And I think I forgot to mention in the other review that I like reading about Ryan in the past. I dunno, I think it's because I have a soft spot for him, and his condition in your story only makes it bigger and more full of fluff for the boy. And he seems (to me, at least) that he's still a somewhat undeveloped character. But that might be only because of his mental status. I still love his character lots and humbly request to see more of him. But whatever, you're the author, not me.
And don't worry so much about not using capitals so much. Yeah, it annoys me, but I'm still like hella addicted to this story, so you're not going to lose a reader over it. And I've kinda gotten used to it after reading seventeen chapters with no caps.
Is it just me, or do my reviews seem really long and ranty??
I'll keep checking back for the next chapter.
Cute bu Psycho.
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May 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm, Well this is a ... different story to say the least.
But you've managed to somehow pull me in even though I was ready to stop reading after reading about what happened to Ryan (seriously, it took me two days before I started reading again). I mean, I know authors are known to do some pretty messed up shit to their characters, but to do something like that when your character is based off a someone as cute as that?? You're braver than I am.
I will admit though that the lack of capitals really does annoy the hell out of me. And your writing style is pretty rough around the edges, but you'll get better with practice (*hint*update*hint*). And I do like the fact that you've included a lot of people from other bands, but I only really know FOB and P!atD and like Gabe, Will and Travis, so it's difficult for me to tell if you make an OC or you just throw in another real person.
Anyways, the plot is really good, full of lots of angst, which I like. And of course, the smexy boys going at it doesn't hurt either. ^_^
Keep up the good work.
Cute but Psycho.
P.S. I'm hoping for some random miracle that Ryan gets better, even though I know it's probably not going to happen. <3
But you've managed to somehow pull me in even though I was ready to stop reading after reading about what happened to Ryan (seriously, it took me two days before I started reading again). I mean, I know authors are known to do some pretty messed up shit to their characters, but to do something like that when your character is based off a someone as cute as that?? You're braver than I am.
I will admit though that the lack of capitals really does annoy the hell out of me. And your writing style is pretty rough around the edges, but you'll get better with practice (*hint*update*hint*). And I do like the fact that you've included a lot of people from other bands, but I only really know FOB and P!atD and like Gabe, Will and Travis, so it's difficult for me to tell if you make an OC or you just throw in another real person.
Anyways, the plot is really good, full of lots of angst, which I like. And of course, the smexy boys going at it doesn't hurt either. ^_^
Keep up the good work.
Cute but Psycho.
P.S. I'm hoping for some random miracle that Ryan gets better, even though I know it's probably not going to happen. <3
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May 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You have no idea how much I love you for posting another chapter before i go!!!!
And to think I may have some Brendon/Nate goodness to come back to (even if im convinced brendon is on the rebound)
Brill chap too i got kinda teary eyed at the hospital scenes *sniff* but thats a good thing i suppose
And to think I may have some Brendon/Nate goodness to come back to (even if im convinced brendon is on the rebound)
Brill chap too i got kinda teary eyed at the hospital scenes *sniff* but thats a good thing i suppose
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May 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ok have to admit never saw the whole church thing coming..and of course brendon finds a hot priest...the only priests i see are wrinkly old men *shudders*
Cant wait for the next chapter!!! although i might have to unless by some miracle an add appears by tomorrow night otherwise its a week of wondering whats gonna happen for me!
Anyways loved the add!!!
Cant wait for the next chapter!!! although i might have to unless by some miracle an add appears by tomorrow night otherwise its a week of wondering whats gonna happen for me!
Anyways loved the add!!!
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April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I cant believe he tried to kill himself!!!!!
It made me sad when patrick threw brendon out...BRENDON IS UPSET TOO!
More soon please IM ADDICTED!!!!
It made me sad when patrick threw brendon out...BRENDON IS UPSET TOO!
More soon please IM ADDICTED!!!!
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April 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!
YOU CAN'T LEAVE IT THERE.....what happened to pete?
UPDATE SOOOOOOOOON PLEASE!
YOU CAN'T LEAVE IT THERE.....what happened to pete?
UPDATE SOOOOOOOOON PLEASE!
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April 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oooh i smell a threesome or it could be just my perverted mind :P
great chap more soon please!!!
great chap more soon please!!!
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April 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Brendon and Pete...they were such a hot couple (when they were together...especially in the bathroom ;)).
Why did they have to fight and say stupid stuff *sniff*
Brill update...lovin this story more every chapter...so UPDATE SOON PLEASE!
Why did they have to fight and say stupid stuff *sniff*
Brill update...lovin this story more every chapter...so UPDATE SOON PLEASE!
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April 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awwww! I wanna hug Brendon (even though thats nothing new...lol)
Great Chap...more SOON pleeeease :)
Great Chap...more SOON pleeeease :)
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April 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this Story!
I couldn't stop reading until i had read all 10 chapters so far...please update soon!!!!
I couldn't stop reading until i had read all 10 chapters so far...please update soon!!!!