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for After He Unlocked the Door

by druscillaryan

schedule September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was pretty good! I really thought Ryan was an evil, sex-crazed home-wrecker. Turns out he has his reasons. Aww...

Good job! :)
person zandrawentz
schedule May 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i like it i think you should write more to this one and make it longer
you have an amazing writing style
schedule March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i literally just read this on the patrickxpete livejournal community before coming here. sooo yeah, i really loved this. i feel so very bad for patrick. pete too but it's harder to do so. you have such a lovely writing style and descriptions! bravo i say.