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Aw, yay, another chapter. I liked it, the beginning was really cute, with the whole sneaking in and finding Kelly asleep. The end was awesome too, I could totally imagine this whole chapter happening with the way you write them. So it's fun to see the beginning stages of their relationship. I wondered though, I mean you had like flashforwards in the beginning when you first wrote about the kids of the hospital, are you gonna do more of them? 'Cause I thought they were really great, it had this really soft vibe to it. Yeah, so, anyway, great work!

Lots of Kelly insight, not so much on Carrie's part. That's not a issue though, because I think it came across pretty well that Carrie wanted to make sure that Kelly was 1) okay with her going out, 2) to make sure Kelly knew it wasn't serious, 3)for Carrie to see Kelly. She let Kelly know without telling her that she would rather spend the time with Kelly, and she asked Kelly to come over. Carrie could have asked her stylist for help, or some other friends. I don't know if it was intentional or not but Carrie's line of "we have to work with him" was telling because Carrie said 'we', technically it shouldn't matter that Kelly has to work with Michael. Kelly was definitely cute, though I hope she finds a movie or something to entertain herself while Carrie is gone. It would be bad and funny if she drank though- bad because it would be weird of her to drink Carrie's alcohol, but funny because you could make it be funny in a number of ways. Thanks for parts :)

Heyy
so I really like the story so far!!! Cant wait for the next chapter!!!

I don't think that Carrie came off badly in this chapter at all. She and Kelly are both unsure of what is going on between them, so if you think that Carrie came off badly for accepting the date, I wouldn't worry. I hate to say that she is confused, because I think both she and Kelly don't want to admit to themselves what they are feeling. I thought it was cute how Kelly had a built in excuse not to give Jason an "in" with Carrie lol. I also thought it was funny that she had picked up on the hospital guy's changes to attract someone- I think that was because she was thinking about her own feelings for Carrie. I actually felt a little bad for Carrie, she had no idea what was going on with the hospital guy, and she came out of that room surprised and like really wondering how Kelly was going to react- that was a nice touch because I'm sure Carrie would be practiced in how to turn someone down nicely after Idol. Good update.

I know I said I didn't know why I wanted to see them in the studio together, but I liked what you wrote. Between the producer(?) and Kelly telling Carrie to stop trying, there was just something about that that rang true. Pus they were adorable together there at the end lol. Great update :)

I really like it so far!

Great.. did not dissapoint..they are just so cute togeter.

Aww, they were sharing stuff about their lives with each other. I don't know why, but I thought it was really sweet. I'm wondering if you're going to write about the studio, like, obviously they have both been in a studio before, and I'm not quite sure what would be interesting, but I guess it's because I like seeing them get to know none another. Carrie being sick was not so fun, but at least they got to spend some time together, cuz it won't always be like that what with Kelly recording. Cool update.

On the one hand I am happy to see their friendship getting deeper, but I'm a dork and was like "Okay, do you want Kelly to get sick too?"- when Carie asked her to stay. And then I felt like a jerk because Carrie's sick. lol I'm kind of thinking Kelly should have just taken Carrie to the hospital, but it's cool that she wants to comfort Carrie and keep her at ease- by not going to the doctor. I'm really interested in seeing how this turns out. Good update :)

I don't know how I missed Ch 9 before, but I just read 9 & 10. I loved them both. Very cute with the outfits & the photographer-I love it when you write things so light, but adorable at the same time. I like how the space of the story is going & how they are gradullay getting to know each other, it is nice that U are not rushing anything-they are just getting to know each other at a normal rate.