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Ashley totally had the best line in chapter nine, when she said that she had seen hookers with more clothes on than Carrie. I'm glad the photo shoot didn't have to be redone because of the crazy photographer. This may sound weird, but I don't find it cute when people dress dogs in clothes, it's weird. Anyway, I think Kelly handled Carrie's dressing Ace up pretty well. I'm surprised no one bugged them during the movie, though I guess the nightmare counts lol. They were funny with their verbal exchanges with one another once they left the shoot. I'm going to stop now before I go on about everything. Those were really good updates, thanks for putting two together for chapter ten.

Glad to see that Kelly and Carrie are getting along so well. Their photographer is insane though, I bet that Michael guy almost regrets the whole idea of the campaign with Carrie and Kelly. lmao. I actually thought the photographer would be kinda pervy, so the nutso expressions dude was a funny surprise. I can't wait to see what happens next in both of your stories.

Sorry, I haven't been reviewing as much, but my computer as being acting as crazy as Carrie & Kelly's photographer ( Ha, Ha). Anyway, great job as always. They are just too cute together. This fic is very charming & I am enjoying reading it. I love their connection w/ the children & I like the idea of them doing something good together...

Aw man, that was funny, the whole orders thing, actually laughed out loud at the 'be a tree' and then the 'how are we supposed to be tall', because it just reminded me of how short Kelly actually is. Great update!

That was sad, but I kinda thought that would happen (to one of the kids) so I was prepared. This is going to sound stupid, but I cannot handle seeing kids who are sick/handicapped, it saddens me and makes me cry. Your story is really good though, so if I end up crying, I'll just blame you. Just kidding. We all know Kelly is cool, so of course she was there for Carrie. (I thought it was neat that Carrie called Kelly about something that personal. Like Carrie said, they are practically strangers, but just the action of going to the hospital and being with the kids let Carrie know that Kelly is trustworthy imho.) Thank you for the update :)

I just caught up on your last 2 chapters. I am really liking the twist on Carrie/Kelly meeting & getting to know each other. U truly have a gift for telling a interesting & emotional story. Looking forward to reading more...

I wonder what's up with Carrie. Love that Kelly was all "I'll be there" lol. Damn, now I have the Friends' theme song in my head. It's good to see Kelly working on a song, but I'm still really curious as to what Carrie was up to, she called like two times while Kelly was recording. Hope you update soon :)

Good update :) Nice job of showing Carrie to be considerate, since it is supposed to be Kelly's vacation. I really like how they are just kinda hanging, it's a nice build up that's just not about the hospital. I feel like I haven't said enough, but everything was spot on from my pov. I'm really interested in seeing where they go from here.

Aw man, that's so sad about the little girl. I can totally relate 'cause I know that people really do that. Oh yeah, sorry 'bout the man thing, it's like a unisex word in my dictionary. Seriously, it's like a permanent fixture in my sentences, it annoys people. It's like 'dude', you know, but you probably do know, so anyway, oh right! Almost forgot, like I think I pointed out something about bold text and I said < strong > but it works with just < b > and too, it depends on the browser. Like I just remembered that I forgot to mention that lol, but yeah..

Yeah, that was sad. I do think it's really cool that Kelly feels so much for Alex though, and that Carrie was worried. I think you're doing a great job of writing Carrie as more friendly :) ( I have a love/hate thing with her too.) I really enjoyed the update, it was sad, but it was kinda cute how Kelly kept trying to avoid.