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I don't care how long the chapters are. I find that sometimes it's better to leave them short; if that makes sense. I liked the update, and I thought it was real that Carrie would wonder about how often Kelly visits the hospital because of 1) being a singer, and 2) Alex is usually with Kelly, and I think Carrie would think that Kelly would be more likely to be at the hospital than her. I know that this might be random, especially since Alex isn't a real kid and it's only been two chapters... but I'd be really sad if her family didn't visit her. I know that's weird, and she could have just avoided answering Carrie's question because of emotions, but yeah... that would make me sad. Great update.

Nice start to your new fic. I like how you started things off w/ a little bit from the future & then went back to telling the story from the first time they meet. It is cool that crrie/kelly meet through a charity. Thanks for posting so quick & I will look forward to more of your writing.

Hey, that was awesome. I like the beginning, seems like it's going to be a great story, and it could go like anywhere right now so. Also, I used to help out at the hospital in my neighborhood all the time, but now I just go like once a month or so, because my life is crazy right now with how busy it is. Reading this brings back all those memories and feelings I get when helping out, it's so amazing how the people there appreciate life. They don't care about anything except living life the way they want to, no matter the restrictions their disease puts on them. You wrote the kids really realistic, sounds like you've maybe done it too?

Anyway, (why are my reviews always ages long with nothing interesting in it whatsoever?) I just wanted to tell you, if you wanted something in like bold view, you could try out < strong > and < /strong >, but I'm not really sure you want anything bold so... Just thought I'd share and tell you to keep it up man..

I like it :) I'm not quite sure what's going to happen, but I have a couple ideas. That said, I'm glad the italics worked out, because I would be sad if we had missed out on a new story from you. I know you said that most of the story is in the past, and I think that's cool, like we're getting the result and the lead in.