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these two are so in love... why dont they just go ahead and say it... i sure hope that jill comes around.... great update... i just love all three of your stories... thanks for updating so often...

Lol, Ashley got stuck in sleeping in the chair. Aww man. It seems as though the closest we're getting to the i love you's are the i like you's. It's kinda cute though that they dance around the subject unknowingly. Yay for tub time and the reassurance that if it comes down to it Carrie's getting picked over Jill.

They are so loving w/ each other. I love how close they have become & I hope Kelly's friend comes around..but if she doesn' they well deal w/it together-because that's what u do when u are in love. Awesome job.

What the hell? Am I the only one still breathing and functioning on here? Someone needs to come on here and make my comment feel bad about itself. hahah, that's karma for the grouchy couple. "You're not gay. That's...that's sick. You're not like that." Ouch. Oh yeah, that was the kiss of death right there. I really really hope Jill reconsiders her actions and has a change of heart while she's on that plane ride. It would be a serious blow if they return to find Jill's just up and left. I love how Carrie's using her telepathic and mind reading abilities to speak for and comfort Kelly. It's sweet. And it's also nice to see that Ashley and Kate are there for her.

WHOA! That's not good. That's gotta be the worst way Jill could have walked in on them... in a compromising position. But at least it was a hot one. "You think she saw?" For some reason I just found that funny. Wonder what Jill's gonna say though, or hell how she's gonna react. Rofl, Kate's a light weight and yet she tried to out drink Ashley. Awww, Carrie and Kate talking was cute. Next update should be a make or break with Jill, her reaction could swing so many ways.

I love these stories! u write their chemistry so well. i am addicted. im totally a sucker for updates!! but seriously, what is wrong w/ carrie? it seems to be an ongoing problem. i hope its nothing to serious. it would kill kelly. anyway, keep on writig, your stories are great!

I think you should stick to original plan and post all the songs at the end of the fic. And guys, if you really wanna know a song, well, they invented google for a reason. ;) That's what I do. "Carrie giggled as Kelly collapsed on top of her." I was youtubing Kelly shit today and came across a comment that said Kelly could top Carrie any day and I immediately thought of this fic. ROFLMAO. They totally just gave Kate an earful. Fuckin hilarious, especially Carrie's comment at the end of that section. I wouldn't mind either. I pretty much xD'ed with laughter through the first half and later with awe when Kate left. I loved that they talked about being in love and how Kelly's afarid she'll ever fall in love. Carrie the comforter did an awesome job of making her see the real reason. It's okay, we already know they're head over heels for each other. I really loved the promise Carrie made at the end. Hope she keeps it.

Um, so I'm completely devoted to this story. Completely. Is there anyway I can join a mailing list or a twitter update every time you write more? I'm in love with Carrie/Kelly and I'm in love with your writing!

I love the whole shopping scene and how Kelly immediately brightens up at a shoe store. Hahaha. Carrie offering to pay for the girls' shoes was too sweet, even if Kelly had planned to from the start. And Kelly's pouting at not getting what she wants... too funny, especially when Carrie turned to Ashley to make her stop. I loved when thy were telling Carrie about their last wine tasting experience, those manners sure make tasting fun. Haha. But the last scene was my favorite. Kate hyped on chocolate, bringing them treats... so funny.

I found it funny how it's 10 lines in and Carrie's already managed to put her foot in her mouth. "It must really suck being y'all, fighting over who wants to pay for the thousand dollar shoes." Lmao. The part about giving Kelly what she wants was both hot and sweet. Lol, I can't believe Kate actually suggested she leave so they could finish up what they were doing. I don't think they would have let her in if they had to "finish up."