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for The Play -Complete

by neelix

person Angie30
schedule April 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Earth shattering indeed! Fabulous job on the lemons! *Heads off to take a cold shower*
person Angie30
schedule April 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Definetly incredible Lemons!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Angie30
schedule April 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love that they made up! I'm so hooked on your stories they are fabulous!
person Angie30
schedule April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the hot shower scene! Oh boy I think Alan made a mess of things with Carrie, hope he can patch things up with her.
schedule April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh man n_n

i dont know how about keeping em on stage n they keep on developing their relation ? =)
schedule March 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy your writing style and have read several of your stories. This one is going rather swimmingly and I cannot wait to see things develop further with this couple. All their couples are very steamy and well done.
person Angie30
schedule March 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG that was hot, I love that you updated this story. I had images of the two of them having a very hot and steam sex in the shower the next day. *Grins* Just a suggestion. And you are welcome for the reviews, I really do love your stories.
person Angie30
schedule March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Mercy that was hot! Well done!