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June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
O.O;; it just stops.... where's the ending? you could make Kyo find Toshiya's body in the bedroom be the ending.... like Kyo went to check on Toshiya and heard no answer when he knocked, so he gets the hide-a-key and opens the door to find the bassist near death... kyo goes over and cradles him as his last breath leaves his body.
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April 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You are very cruel. I love it and hate it at the same time. It was written well not many mistakes. I almost cried it was very powerful. Hope to see more work from you. Ja!
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April 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good story