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April 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I wan the link!!! XD
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April 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
great story! is there any way u could tell me where the rest of it is posted? i wanna see what happens :)
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March 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Another update! Finally!
Awww Frerard plus babehs=cute <3
Awww Frerard plus babehs=cute <3
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December 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AWWWWW *wipes tear* That's amazing! I love it so much! Fantastically written, can't wait for more :)
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December 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A friend of mine linked me to this story after I told them I had AS. Tbh, I think your portrayal of Gerard is a bit over-the-top. I'm aware that people with Asperger's--and all other ASDs for that matter--are affected differently, but Gerard's behavior seems closer to someone with classic Autism or PDD-NOS than AS. Also, a bit of constructive criticism writing-wise: stories generally flow better if you keep a unified point of view. Choose first or third and stick with it, rather than switching back and forth. If you wish to write from multiple characters' perspectives, you should use third omniscient (the all-knowing narrator), or else switch perspectives between chapters, instead of during (i.e. Chapter 1 from Mikey's POV, Chapter 2 from Frank's, etc.)
Other than that, though, you have a rather adorable (and addictive!)story here, which I plan on continuing to read through the end.
I particularly enjoyed this last chapter (28;Christmas). The real Gerard has always helped me feel "normal"; on top of which, my MCR fandom led me to meet another girl with AS who I now consider one of my best friends(Coincidentally, she organized the very protest you mentioned attending ;)), as well as a woman whose daughter is Autistic. My parents often give me a hard time about my obsession, but my life wouldn't be the same without it. So it is with a slight hint of irony that I couldn't help but smile at Frank's present, as I know exactly how much it means.
Other than that, though, you have a rather adorable (and addictive!)story here, which I plan on continuing to read through the end.
I particularly enjoyed this last chapter (28;Christmas). The real Gerard has always helped me feel "normal"; on top of which, my MCR fandom led me to meet another girl with AS who I now consider one of my best friends(Coincidentally, she organized the very protest you mentioned attending ;)), as well as a woman whose daughter is Autistic. My parents often give me a hard time about my obsession, but my life wouldn't be the same without it. So it is with a slight hint of irony that I couldn't help but smile at Frank's present, as I know exactly how much it means.
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November 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I have to admit I registered to this site especially to review this story. I have Asperger Syndrome myself and at first when I read about Gerard I was like, wtf, am I that complicated too? But it seems to me that Gerard has some sort of other 'illness' besides AS (borderline or something), 'cause AS people usually aren't really like that. Thank god :P Not to downrate your story or anything, because I love it and it's one of the best I ever read <3 There's just one thing that bothers me a bit though: Asperger people tend to feel older and more mature than their real age, instead of younger and childish. But that's okay 'cause it's all still fiction =] Amazing story! Keep it up!
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November 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
HAHA! The end of that was classic, so witty and brilliant. Loved it. Can't wait for more.
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November 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hey! love the story! its so unique. i can't wait to see what happens next :)
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October 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is an awesome story!!! i just found it this afternoon and couldn't stop reading until i finished it :) i love your version of the frank/gerard story. is this the end? i really hope not...
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October 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!! That was so adorable. I just want to hug him. Please don't tell me you're going to break them up? If you do I will cry! Anyway, next chapter soon me hopes