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August 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
What a great story so far!! I really love this couple. lol I hope that you update soon. ok?
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August 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Loving this story so far. I hope that there is more soon. :D
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July 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
mk so i about flipped the fuck out when i saw that you you actually finally updated this, lol. it's about damn time, girl. so after the little bit of hotness in the barn and straight into dinner with the fam, eh? loved it. that is kinda one of my fave things about visiting family with someone you are dating...sex right before dinner with none the wiser? yes, please. lol. and the very serious conversation at dinner...lol. totally one of those things you gotta do that no one wants to, but is kinda a necessity to put the parentals at ease, i think. lol.
kelly saying she was thinking of saving telling her parents until the wedding was freakin priceless, haha. i could imagine that whole little bit play out with her saying that and stephen tripping out, lol. and then the joke about having carole tell them was pretty hilarious, too. i just really loved the awkward humor of it all. i also liked that kelly insisted on clearing the dishes and loading the dishwasher. such a small little detail, but really showed that she still has her head on straight and hasnt gotten too big for her britches and remembers her manners, which is clearly the case given everything we see from her in interviews, etc. so i thought that was a nice touch and showed a lot about her personality.
kelly stopping dead in her tracks when carole said she was going to get her room ready totally cracked me up, too. the fact that they hadnt thought about their sleeping arrangements and kelly was clearly not happy at them was so something that i could see happening. it's like...oh yeah...just cuz your parents are cool with us dating they arent gonna let us sleep together in their house? bummer. lol. but i thought it was cute how carrie knew exactly what kellly was thinking and whispered in her ear that she would come find her, lol. gotta love the sneakage.
looooved this:
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It’s ok,” she reached for her hands. “Now…”
“Now…” Carrie repeated as she slid on to the bed, crawling slowly over Kelly. She held herself up over her before slowly lowering and pressing their bodies together as she captured her lips.
Kelly’s hands made their way to the blonde’s neck before they pulled apart. “Now,” she let her hands roam. “I believe we continue what we started earlier…”
Carrie sighed. “Good,” she pressed her knee against Kelly. “Cause we’ve got some catching up to do.”
Kelly just nodded, unable to speak as she pulled Carrie’s face towards her. The blonde barely had to do anything to set her off.
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very simple and subtle, but very hot and effective, also.
yep...i think this fic is definitely worth continuing, lol. =)
kelly saying she was thinking of saving telling her parents until the wedding was freakin priceless, haha. i could imagine that whole little bit play out with her saying that and stephen tripping out, lol. and then the joke about having carole tell them was pretty hilarious, too. i just really loved the awkward humor of it all. i also liked that kelly insisted on clearing the dishes and loading the dishwasher. such a small little detail, but really showed that she still has her head on straight and hasnt gotten too big for her britches and remembers her manners, which is clearly the case given everything we see from her in interviews, etc. so i thought that was a nice touch and showed a lot about her personality.
kelly stopping dead in her tracks when carole said she was going to get her room ready totally cracked me up, too. the fact that they hadnt thought about their sleeping arrangements and kelly was clearly not happy at them was so something that i could see happening. it's like...oh yeah...just cuz your parents are cool with us dating they arent gonna let us sleep together in their house? bummer. lol. but i thought it was cute how carrie knew exactly what kellly was thinking and whispered in her ear that she would come find her, lol. gotta love the sneakage.
looooved this:
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It’s ok,” she reached for her hands. “Now…”
“Now…” Carrie repeated as she slid on to the bed, crawling slowly over Kelly. She held herself up over her before slowly lowering and pressing their bodies together as she captured her lips.
Kelly’s hands made their way to the blonde’s neck before they pulled apart. “Now,” she let her hands roam. “I believe we continue what we started earlier…”
Carrie sighed. “Good,” she pressed her knee against Kelly. “Cause we’ve got some catching up to do.”
Kelly just nodded, unable to speak as she pulled Carrie’s face towards her. The blonde barely had to do anything to set her off.
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very simple and subtle, but very hot and effective, also.
yep...i think this fic is definitely worth continuing, lol. =)
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July 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Soooo glad you updated, and i personally think you should do so more often, because this fic is pretty damn great, lol
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March 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Barns ARE fun. But Dude, you so gotta update this, like pretty please? For the love of Clarkwood, you just gotta! The have matching four leaf clovers! If that doesn't scream commitment, I don't know what does. And also, I think Kelly should so meet Britney while Carrie is around and like Carrie should get all jealous - it'd be amusing. But seriously, kick ass story.
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January 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*peeks in hoping for an update...doesn't see one...cries a little*
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November 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wooo! loved it, lol. it was hot and cute and funny all rolled into one...perfect. definitely can't wait to see how dinner goes. i hope carrie's parents aren't too, too hard on kelly, lol.
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November 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love barns.
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November 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
phew...glad that talk with the band went well. i totally LOLed when Chad asked if they were getting fired when Carrie first started talking. and when Kelly called Jimmy out about being into her? so great. poor dude...although, who can blame him? i am happy everything is out in the open, at least with the band. but they definitely need to talk to their families, and pronto, before somebody slips and says something or some photog gets a behind the scenes picture they werent expecting. oh, and i am a huge fan of how cute, sexy, and loving they were in the bedroom. really great update! can't wait for the next one.
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November 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aw! that was so cute of kelly!!