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by ClarkWoodFan

schedule July 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
well you wernt wrong when saying that wede like this chapter!!!! it was Hot!!! had to turn up the air conditioning few notches!!!..haha great job
schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
all i have to say about this is...HOOOTTT CHAPTER!!! great job;):)
schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ok, so huge lol at the story title. secondly, that was hhhhhhottttt. lol. (if you put more than one 'o' it looks like hoot, so...)and yea, just one question: commode? lol. update soon. like soon soon caue i wanna know what happens next. shoot, now i know how y'all feel when i don't update quickly. not a fun feeling, lol. did i say it was a great update?
person Junkyxl
schedule July 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Cool story. I like how they're so playful and all, and of course the kissing scenes and stuff is awesome to read, lol. Can't wait to read more.
schedule July 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lol, somehow doors never lock in clarkwood land. so that was hot and funny all in one which is always a good thing. and i just updated, so boo-ya! lol, plus i was away all weekend, so you totally coulda doubled up. i mean, i am like 40 something chapters ahead of you, lol. j/c. but yea. great update!
person Violence
schedule July 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Pfft, what a tease. Lmao at the "no, you can't watch me change."
schedule July 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Heyy
so sorry to hear that you're under the weather, that sucks:(:(. But will it make it feel slightly better to tell y that your chapter rocked!!!. The lame excuse Kelly had made me laugh so hard haha, im sure Matt is not convinced!!!! I wonder whats gunna happen next!! I hope you feel better!!!
person Violence
schedule July 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Dayum. What a way to end it. I say bring it! Yeah, next update should be fun reading, lol.
schedule July 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hmmm....Kelly smiled at her reassuringly. “I think so…” that's an odd statement. you know? on the one hand you got the rassuring smile, on the other "i think so"? i guess it all depends on her tone of voice, right? dang it, i am totally overanalyzing this aren't i?
person Violence
schedule July 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hehe. I love crap like that. It's all carefree and cute. Oh I'm sure Carrie will be remembering her, lol.