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July 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I swear this is my favorite story on here ive read it over and over agin it is so unbearable cute and it makes me break out and cry every time I read it
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June 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! The set up got to me, so did the characters and their histories. It tugged at my heart-strings.
I love the plot, how it all moved. You always had something going on, some twist to move the story and the relationship on. There was never a dull moment - you kept my interest up right to the end.
I love how everything had it's own pace, it never felt rushed and you gave 'screen time' when it was needed. It all just flowed so beautifully.
You had me worried when you brought Alexis in to the mix but you wove her in there beautifully. And the way you just left her when she told about Bill and she was just forgotten...It made me glad ^-^
The haikus also were really pretty. I like how they formed and how they reflected Tom's state of mind.
The only thing that bugged me was the ending. What happens now? Bill and Tom are together but what happened after the restaurant? Did Tom go back to the institute? Did Bill's mom take him under her wing? Did Tom make it on his own without help from anyone? Did they work out despite the obstacles?
Inquiring minds want to know! ;D
I love the plot, how it all moved. You always had something going on, some twist to move the story and the relationship on. There was never a dull moment - you kept my interest up right to the end.
I love how everything had it's own pace, it never felt rushed and you gave 'screen time' when it was needed. It all just flowed so beautifully.
You had me worried when you brought Alexis in to the mix but you wove her in there beautifully. And the way you just left her when she told about Bill and she was just forgotten...It made me glad ^-^
The haikus also were really pretty. I like how they formed and how they reflected Tom's state of mind.
The only thing that bugged me was the ending. What happens now? Bill and Tom are together but what happened after the restaurant? Did Tom go back to the institute? Did Bill's mom take him under her wing? Did Tom make it on his own without help from anyone? Did they work out despite the obstacles?
Inquiring minds want to know! ;D
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February 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow :D
That's soooo sweet <3
Love the ending :D
Love Ria xo
That's soooo sweet <3
Love the ending :D
Love Ria xo
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February 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!
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February 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story. I mean I usualy don't read Tokio Hotel stories but I like this one. I hope you finish it and if you could email me when you update (if you update). I don't know if my email comes up or not so loverjrock@ yahoo. com
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January 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was really good! Are you going to continue it? I really hope you do soon!
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January 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I never check for an update. I assume Bill is going to face his old demons and of course he'll need Tomi there for support.
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December 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Amazing story so far!! I cant wait to see what happens. tis addicting writing, well done!!
xxKay
xxKay
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December 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hello :]
I love your Tokio Hotel stories :D
They are all amazing, but I was wondering if there are any other chapters for this?
Amazing stories :D
Love Ria xo
I love your Tokio Hotel stories :D
They are all amazing, but I was wondering if there are any other chapters for this?
Amazing stories :D
Love Ria xo
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November 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hey please please im dying for see what's going to happen please i'm begging you upload fast the next chapters ( or you will be responsable for one dead jajajaja)
bye! ^^
bye! ^^