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by Boganwendy

schedule March 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This was great...wish there was more.
schedule October 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
oooh, please write another part to this?!
i loved every second of it!!!
schedule February 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I couldn't stop myself from getting Lita OOC. I find it hard to keep characters in character which is why I usually use also of OC.

Nevertheless, I'm creating an alternate ending for this to suit those who wanted Lita unwilling to the end.
person CandyCaner
schedule January 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice work! I thought it was really well written, and Lita and Kane were very in-character. I was a little disappointed to see her give in towards the end because I liked when Kane was in control and Lita was almost defenseless (though she got him good before she ran off!)

I'd definitely like to see more! :)