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I have this horrible feeling that little Jack went to find Charity and is now lost somewhere in LA. I have no kids, but I lost my dog once and it was awful. The scenarios that went through my head were the worst possible things that could happen.....eaten by mountain lions, caught by people who eat dogs, hit by a car and dying on the side of the road, stolen by fur traders....it was bad.

When I finally found her (on the other side of the lake happy as a clam) I could have killed her had I not been so relieved. I can only imagine how much worse it would be with an actual child. Gah! Evil cliff hanger.

What? Aw Hell I think Johnny is the one who needs some space that poor man just can't catch a break.

OH NOES!!! JACK IS MISSING!! Did he run off to find Charity? Is Johnny gonna give Vanessa the boot? Please say yes!! My heart broke when Jack was all distraught about Charity not coming back. And don't worry about us love. School comes first. But that *is* an evil cliffie. ^.^ Poor Johnny is all confuzzled about Charity and such. *gasps* He didn't do the nasty with Vanessa did he? XXOO

Aw crackerjacks are you kidding me?! It's just seems like everything is a freakin downward spiral for the poor man! Something happy needs to happen!! LOL No but seriously good story I'm hooked.

O0h, cliff hanger....wasn't expecting it. I love it that there is another chapter already up! Cheers, Free

Son of a gun, shit woman!! That was just awful. Well, not your writing, but what happened. You know what I mean. Oh my heart broke, when Jack said that he had 7 dollars to pay her. That was too cute. Well, I am hanging by an eyelash here, but I know you won't keep up waiting for too long. XXOO

I love the kids. They are wonderful. Seven dollars. Too cute. Cheers, Free

I choked at the end of the chapter. Honestly. And it was especially unfortunate because I had just taken a drag from my cigarette. Of course, the insanely gorgeous Vanessa just *had* to choose *that* moment to walz in the door. And might I add, that she *is* freaking gorgeous? I looked at a picture of her, and nearly died. LOL. I am taller than her though. LOL. Of course Vanessa is going to assume the flowers and candy are for her, freak out about why Charity is there, the kids will become ecstatic, Johnny will be conflicted and confused. *sigh* Lily-Rose is quite perceptive. That's what it takes to make us happy. And, little Jack is as well.

I am EVER so glad that you love that movie. Those guys....they rock my face off. LOL. I am *high pitched voice* STOKED, to learn they are making another movie. *does happy dance* "Duh-dun-nah-duh-dun-nah-duh-dun-nah" *Zombie groan* LOL. Simon Pegg is bloody fantastic.

I can't wait for the next update, I am hanging by an eyelash here.....*skips off to check CA

*presses one of Naomi's hankerchiefs to bloody nose* Dear sweet Jesus woman. I'm a bit speechless at the moment. I would smoke a cigarette, but I just finished one. *sigh* Well, Johnny and his 'shenanigens' (fuck how do you spell that word?) was adorable. Naughty man, asking her to stay the night, and giving her wine. I loved their bantering about the cardboard box. Ah yes...the zombies. Quite frightening really. I'm with you, Charity, and Lenny on that. I have a bumper sticker on myspace, and I'll have to send it to you...It says, "You're a good friend, but if zombies chase us, I'm so tripping you." LOL. I would never trip you though. I would help you escape in a Mcguyver type way. Make a flame thrower with my perfume, and a lighter or something. LOL. So sweet they fell asleep together on the couch. I wonder what's going to happen in the morning. Is Lily-Rose going to find them and freak the fuck out? Oh dear. I hope Charity wakes up first before they are found. *looks worried.* Well darling, as always, I cannot wait to read more, and I will happily skip off to check the CA story. Oh, I see what you mean about being afraid of bringing your typewriter to school, but I too, love the noise they make. The hum...the satistfying loud, 'clack clack' when you type. My dad used to have one. I wonder if he still does, and if he'd give it to me. ^.^ Cause that would be just super. I would be a real writer then. ^.^ XXOO

Oh, poor poor Lily-Rose. She is close to figuring out the truth. And that dream. Oh the poor darling. Thankfully they weren't discovered. And yes, slow in the morning is funny. When Jason tries to wake me up, I say some funny shit.

"Wake up."
"No."
"Wake up baby."
"No. I don't wanna be a fireman. I'm a princess."
"Well, OK then princess, wake up. I'm hungry."
*Slowly gets out of bed rubbing eyes, then gets up to leave the room*
"Where are you going?"
"To make your breakfast bitch."

LOL. Charity wanting to make dinner at 9 thirty in the morning was awesome, as was Johnny following her around like a puppy in the kitchen. I love how she was so disconcerted by his presence. I sure as hell wouldn't be able to form a coherent thought. LOL.

And YES!!! ZOMBIE PLAN!!!! Where do we start? Oh, but have you seen Sean of the Dead? It's ever so funny. As is, Hot Fuzz. I love those two guys. They are hilarious. Simon Pegg, and Nicholas something. As always, can't wait to read more. XXOO