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February 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Lets see...First, I will say you succeeded in your goal. And secondly, I’m glad to know I’m not the only one who has trouble with writing sex scenes. I find it to be rather uncomfortable. I think because I know kids might possibly be reading the story. Either way, thanks for the read and unknown help/guidance with a kick start to my sexual imagination.
How dorky can I get? lol
How dorky can I get? lol
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June 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very good! I like how you wrote this and I love that it is a Gackt story. Excellent!
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January 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like this a lot. It is interesting how you never name wither character. It's two faceless strangers (at least from the reader's perspectives) that are able to finally come together intimately. I like how the reader is able to insert themselves into the story instantaneously. A reader can relate to this, if perhaps they have had some kind of similar experience. Keep up the good work! And bring out some new stuff, I like your stories. :)