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by druscillaryan

person lolo313
schedule December 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Overall I liked it, like I do all your other stories. It seemed a bit odd though; I felt that your build up was a bit weak, and the fact that three bands seem to live solely within the confines of one hotel strikes me as a bit off. Still, a good story, very enjoyable.