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Are you gonna update this anymore? I'm waiting for the next chapter. It's so good!

LestatWhore this story is awesome.
I can't wait til you update it again asap. :D

An update! How cute are these two? Good job again, looking forward to the next one.

Fast updates...I love it! And I think they should find out the sex at the next ultrasound. I don't like the whole wanting it to be a surprise thing that parents do, haha.

Awww. Poor girl. This line however....was brilliant. "He came home smelling of success and hotdogs." I love you. LOL. I can't wait until the ultrasound. Ooh! I'm so excited, and I'm so glad you feel like fan fic again. ^.^

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Wow, I really do love this story. Hope to see more chapters soon!!!

This is such a great story! Please write more!

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!! That totally made up for his behavior in the last chapter. That was so sweet. Criss is a good boy. I love how everyone is picking up on the clues on how he feels about her, but him. He's still a bit clueless, granted, yes, he cares about her and whatnot, but I don't think he knows he LURVES her. ^.^ This was simply lovely darling, as always I can't wait to read more, and I hope your exam goes well for you so you aren't so stressed anymore.

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LOL. Wow, see what college does to you? It fries your brain. LOL. Let that be a lesson to us all!! LOL. Glad that they had a talk, but sad, because Marilyn is so hurt, and Criss is kind of confuzzled, well, only slighty. It was sweet that he stayed there all day and all night with her. Sweet also, that he was concerned about getting her a bigger bed and baby furniture. I can't help but wonder though, how long it's going to be, before he realizes he doesn't want her and his baby sleeping in an attic. It was beyond adorable that he kissed her tummy, and hoped the baby was aware of it. He can be a doll when he wants to be. And I really hope that's the last time he hurts Marilyn, because next time, it won't be a paddle, next time, I'm going to bring out the heavy artillery....maybe I will borrow Lenny's whip. ^.^

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Yay!! *jumps up and down squeeing excitedly* An update!! I tried to type a review last night, but Baxter the Internet ghost ate it. He seems to like fucking with me a lot, the evil bastard. Yes, you were right on about the heart beat, and if I recall the weeks properly, she's also right on schedule for that too. That was just too sweet, Criss tearing up at the sound of his baby's heart beat like that. It takes a pretty strong man not to get emotional at hearing the baby's heartbeat for the first time and seeing it on the ultrasound as well. I loved Marilyn's declarations about having to make sure the baby is looked after by doctors. That exchange made me laugh out loud. And the second chapter...*sighs* Oh Criss. You naughty naughty boy. I'm sorry, but I warned you....*bends Criss over knee and paddles him again* Just like a man to panic and shirk his duties as a father, and want to have "one last hurrah". I hate men like that. Actually, I hate men in general when it comes to being knocked up. They're so insensitive, they don't have to make any sacrifices or suffer at all. They got a roll in the hay and a good nights sleep. We get stretch marks, permanent bitch mode for nine months, (and after for lack of sleep and more of the same hormones) 20-40 extra pounds, hot flashes, weird cravings, being intensely uncomfortable when the baby begins tumbling around at 8 months like a freaking cirque de soliel acrobat....they don't have to do a damn thing, and I'm not even talking about the birth yet. Oh, and what drives me bat shit insane is when those stupid modern guys announce, "We're pregnant." "We're" not anything. Assholes. LOL. Anywho, I can't believe Criss was talking to his ex. Or that he didn't tell Marilyn about her to begin with. I wonder what kind of conversation they are going to have when you update again. I hope it involves lots of groveling, and she makes him suffer big time!! The nerve of him.

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