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February 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Im sorry I hope you get better
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February 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love you, love you...Dunno, really >_<
As I'm sick too, maybe -just maybe okay?- will I be the generous person I've always been and beg you one more time v_v
It has been very difficult to read this one, 'cause a friend of mine was doing her japanese homework by my side and kept asking me questions on words and grammar. Seems like Kyo tried to not be overwhelmed by his feelings for Kaoru and - "Deeeevyyyyyyyyy how do you say thaaaaat ? I hate this prof, hate her hate her hate her !!"-...and the guitarist noticed something was wrong.
A huge grin spread my lips when Kaoru told Kyo he could call him, to talk -oh yeah, dirty talks on the phone mwahahahaaa.
I'm impressed how you can take Kyo's thoughts on the same path for a good number of chapters now, and not making it boring ! Good work, as always! Though, I really should send you some atomic bomb or something for a certain sentence, where you boldly say Kaoru and Toshiya are flirting...
I SAID WE SHOULD KEEP A EYE ON THEM !! I SAID IT RIGHT!!
There will be a very painful death for you, dear one, if they ever happen to become a couple >____< There's a stamp on Kaoru's ass : KYO'S !
lol
For a more serious review, let's just say that you went around it with maestria. As usual, Kyo is a delightful character, and his love is slowly growing more and more to despair, but he just accept it. And it makes it calmer, stronger. Desparate but passionate. Hopelessly romantic...
The surprise here is that he made a step to cross the distance between the guitarist and himself, built by his own silence.
Kaoru's reaction are frustrating, but I'm becoming accostumed now -________________- What does he think of the situation at hand ? I'm nearly sure it's him who whispered behind Kyos' back when he was about to go upside down with the rope scene. His actions are always discreet in the few chapters where he does something, but seems like those actions are more....affectionate...Or is it just me ? Maybe.
But Kaoru show way to much concern over his little singer than he should have, leader or not. After all, the other members didn't look like getting really worried -okay, Die is a bit worried womewhere- by the changes in Kyos' mood. It affects Kaoru, and the leader-sama I-gotta-be-a-mother-hen-for-all-my-band-members-always spirit is not the only thing...
Hey, d'you know that it's 2:17 in the morning and this is a really really really long review, so finish your damn chapter ten and upload it ç____ç
As I'm sick too, maybe -just maybe okay?- will I be the generous person I've always been and beg you one more time v_v
It has been very difficult to read this one, 'cause a friend of mine was doing her japanese homework by my side and kept asking me questions on words and grammar. Seems like Kyo tried to not be overwhelmed by his feelings for Kaoru and - "Deeeevyyyyyyyyy how do you say thaaaaat ? I hate this prof, hate her hate her hate her !!"-...and the guitarist noticed something was wrong.
A huge grin spread my lips when Kaoru told Kyo he could call him, to talk -oh yeah, dirty talks on the phone mwahahahaaa.
I'm impressed how you can take Kyo's thoughts on the same path for a good number of chapters now, and not making it boring ! Good work, as always! Though, I really should send you some atomic bomb or something for a certain sentence, where you boldly say Kaoru and Toshiya are flirting...
I SAID WE SHOULD KEEP A EYE ON THEM !! I SAID IT RIGHT!!
There will be a very painful death for you, dear one, if they ever happen to become a couple >____< There's a stamp on Kaoru's ass : KYO'S !
lol
For a more serious review, let's just say that you went around it with maestria. As usual, Kyo is a delightful character, and his love is slowly growing more and more to despair, but he just accept it. And it makes it calmer, stronger. Desparate but passionate. Hopelessly romantic...
The surprise here is that he made a step to cross the distance between the guitarist and himself, built by his own silence.
Kaoru's reaction are frustrating, but I'm becoming accostumed now -________________- What does he think of the situation at hand ? I'm nearly sure it's him who whispered behind Kyos' back when he was about to go upside down with the rope scene. His actions are always discreet in the few chapters where he does something, but seems like those actions are more....affectionate...Or is it just me ? Maybe.
But Kaoru show way to much concern over his little singer than he should have, leader or not. After all, the other members didn't look like getting really worried -okay, Die is a bit worried womewhere- by the changes in Kyos' mood. It affects Kaoru, and the leader-sama I-gotta-be-a-mother-hen-for-all-my-band-members-always spirit is not the only thing...
Hey, d'you know that it's 2:17 in the morning and this is a really really really long review, so finish your damn chapter ten and upload it ç____ç
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February 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What a great way to wake up !
Though...Seems like you like me to beg you more and more...
Very hot scenes you've made there, even if I'm becoming a little anxious about all this fuc*ing Kaoru. It all could be a strong affection leading his actions or just a playfull friendship. My romantic side choose the first one, but not my rational one.
Huummm, gonna have a headache now...
But why will Kaoru act like this if he wasn't a little attracted by Kyo? And what about Toshiya ? Could Kaoru be attracted to the bassist instead of the singer ? They're acting strange, those two...gotta keep an eye on them ><
Anyway, good chapter, as always ! It has lightened my bad mood clouded by the flu -________-
Need another one NOW !
Though...Seems like you like me to beg you more and more...
Very hot scenes you've made there, even if I'm becoming a little anxious about all this fuc*ing Kaoru. It all could be a strong affection leading his actions or just a playfull friendship. My romantic side choose the first one, but not my rational one.
Huummm, gonna have a headache now...
But why will Kaoru act like this if he wasn't a little attracted by Kyo? And what about Toshiya ? Could Kaoru be attracted to the bassist instead of the singer ? They're acting strange, those two...gotta keep an eye on them ><
Anyway, good chapter, as always ! It has lightened my bad mood clouded by the flu -________-
Need another one NOW !
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February 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed this chapter!
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January 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nyah *x*
sounds fangirlistic, i know, but NYAAAAAAHH *x*
Kyo laughing...Hell, it remember me a live in Paris -well the two lives in Paris in fact, when he couldn't stop smiling...Nyah again XD
If you have SEVERAL NICE CHAPTERS waiting, why don't you post it you cruel author ! Monster !!
And i think it would be fun, this Kao pov >-<
Unless tou got better in those NICE chapters comming soon...
See ya !
sounds fangirlistic, i know, but NYAAAAAAHH *x*
Kyo laughing...Hell, it remember me a live in Paris -well the two lives in Paris in fact, when he couldn't stop smiling...Nyah again XD
If you have SEVERAL NICE CHAPTERS waiting, why don't you post it you cruel author ! Monster !!
And i think it would be fun, this Kao pov >-<
Unless tou got better in those NICE chapters comming soon...
See ya !
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January 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I would love to read Kaoru's POV, and keep up the good work!
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January 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well, I've read this chapter a thousand times, or so it seems to me, and I just wanted to know : If Kaoru and Kyo are going together in the end, will you take this story and rewrite it all from Kaoru POV ? Could be interesting, don't you think ? Mwahahaha
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January 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying this story.
Please keep it up.
Please keep it up.
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January 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ow, yeah, I know I'm the best thing in everyone's life X) *as if....*
Really nice chapter 2 ! Longer than the first no? But I'm not complaining, in fact, I'd like it to be more and more and more long by every chapter that will be coming soon. 'Cause they'll be there soon, uh ?! SAY IT ! >_______<
I really, really like your Kyo. Strong and beautiful yet jealous and nearly desperate for some affection...Kaoru would be a idiot to say no to such a man. If it ever came, I'll gladly take the singer with me XD
And I wanna know what is this fu**ing guitarist thinking, damnit ! Friendship, yeah, but for others !
Now that I thought about it, will one of their bandmates discover Kyos' secret or will this story only show Kyos' devotion to his gorgeous lead guitarist ?
...Too much questions for the readers and not enough chapters to bring answers...
Damn you...
Really nice chapter 2 ! Longer than the first no? But I'm not complaining, in fact, I'd like it to be more and more and more long by every chapter that will be coming soon. 'Cause they'll be there soon, uh ?! SAY IT ! >_______<
I really, really like your Kyo. Strong and beautiful yet jealous and nearly desperate for some affection...Kaoru would be a idiot to say no to such a man. If it ever came, I'll gladly take the singer with me XD
And I wanna know what is this fu**ing guitarist thinking, damnit ! Friendship, yeah, but for others !
Now that I thought about it, will one of their bandmates discover Kyos' secret or will this story only show Kyos' devotion to his gorgeous lead guitarist ?
...Too much questions for the readers and not enough chapters to bring answers...
Damn you...
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January 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
More please!