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for Baby Can I Hold You

by writer101

schedule August 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. It is interesting to read and definitely different from the others. I hope that you finish this story in the future. Please. Love this couple pairing.
schedule August 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great story. I hope that you will continue. I want the happy ending. :)
person Violence
schedule July 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Elle is adorable. And to think I almost forgot Kelly lost her memory. Loved that bit with Reba insight at the end.
person Violence
schedule July 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit. That's wicked. She wasn't even legally married to the bastard and he still felt like he owned her. Proved innocent? As if they didn't take pictures of the aftermath. Holler for happy family time. One thing I would like to see is Paul sent to jail and made into some big, burly dudes bitch, lol. The ultimate karmic payback.
person ctallent
schedule July 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
great update... good that paul and kelly were never married...now maybe the girls can get hitched....
person Violence
schedule July 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Busted a motherfuckin gut at the kissing part. There're no words to describe insanity/hilarity of your fics. That part also built on the Carrie's the dude in the relationship factor even more. Lol, that cab driver attitude never gets old. I totally imagined him as a miserable indian guy with a hardcore motherland broken english accent. Add in a drunk Kelly and it's all sorts of funny. Poor Carrie having to fight off horny drunk Kelly, her falling asleep just made it better.
person ctallent
schedule June 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
great update... carrie how can you turn her down.... elle is freaking hilarious.
person greens28
schedule June 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Elle is to cute-I love her character. They make such a great family. Loved it.
person Violence
schedule June 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
"seems everyone saw her as the man in their relationship." Rofl, too accurate. Carrie's totally the dude. Typical of Jeanne and Ashley to be attempting to plan the wedding without even consulting the half of the two people actually getting married. The ending was fucking adorable on Elle's part. Makes me wish all kids were like that.
person Violence
schedule June 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
LMFAO x 1000. First of all the Ashley/Kelly/Carrie/Elle coversation was ridiculously funny. The best part was the last two sentences though. i just laughed and laughed... and laughed. The irony was fucking hilarious. Maybe I'm easily amused or maybe my imagination's exceptionally vivd. Maybe I've got the same sense of humor as you or maybe I'm just some crazy who finds hilarity in shit that shouldn't be funny. Either way you never fail to crack me the fuck up.