rate_review Reviews

I got a little too excited reading this chapter so I had to read it five times before I could fully process it. So yeah, I face palmed at the part where Paul came home. Totally knew that was gonna happen. "Hitting her first on the face, she tasted blood." I literally yelled fuck when I saw that. goddamn you Paul. And then that sweet little moment between Carrie and Elle. Complete heart melter. Paul's attitude and crying is confusing the hell outta me. The man has issues. Sweet jesus, I think I teared up a little. Carrie should kick his ass. Right there, in the waiting room.

NONONONONNO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WHAT THE HELL?!?! KELLY CAN'T BE LEFT ALONE! please don't let anything happen to her!!

All hail Carrie. She's pretty damn amazing here. And she's got the flirting on high. yay. I hope Kelly doesn't get scared enough to not runaway with Carrie and Elle. That last line was really, really cute. can't wait for more.

I think I love Carrie. So damn sweet. Paul is such a prick. how could he be so cruel to his own daughter? I think 70032 and I are still waiting for that bus... or that freak heartattack. love this story though.

alright! go carrie!

OH! MY! GOD!!!!!!!!

That. Was. Beautiful. I love that Carrie finally found out and made a move. It was damn glorious. But uh something tells me the next chapter isn't going to be so pleasant. Hopefully Carrie's got her blunt object ready to go.

very emotional update. I loved it-this fic is very different & I like it. Carrie needs o take her Louisville Slugger to Paul. Awesome job-look forward to reading more.

best chapter ending so far

i was serious about that bus comment...when?