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January 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i really loved the part with their on each other's hearts. so cute!
this too
"..' not one bit, im too busy missing someone else to think about sarah.....and right now im not missing anything,for the first time in a long time I feel like everything is in its right place..... "
great job!
this too
"..' not one bit, im too busy missing someone else to think about sarah.....and right now im not missing anything,for the first time in a long time I feel like everything is in its right place..... "
great job!
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January 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Someone really needs to kill that bastard. xD And Kelly, Kelly, Kelly. what the fuck are you doing? Grab the girls and run. far far away. This is why abuse stories frustrate me. i can't understand how anyone would let someone knock their self esteem to shit or let their lives be completely over run. it's just one guy right? how much damage could he possibly do? then again when people get debilitated by fear it goes to the extreme and beyond. how Carrie doesn't see the fakeness of Paul and the fear in Kelly is amazing. then again she always was the dense one. can't wait to see how far you take this.
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January 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
so when does paul "accidentally" get hit by a bus?
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January 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
loved it.
btw what happened "night time talks"? :'(
btw what happened "night time talks"? :'(
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January 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
holy shit dude, intense much?
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January 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WTF? why would she not leave him the first time he hit her? It's not like she actually loves the guy. lol, why does no one ever listen to Ashley. she's the voice of reason. Holy shit! Kelly has a baby!? I would have gotten the little girl and RAN. I'm sure Carrie would be more than willing to take them.
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January 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh wow! another one? you're spoiling us. i really liked it. especially this part:
"Turning the corner into the kitchen she could finally see what had been keeping him at the table and not making his way towards her the minute he heard her entering. There sitting at her table was the thing she loved most in the world sitting across from the thing she hated most."
"Turning the corner into the kitchen she could finally see what had been keeping him at the table and not making his way towards her the minute he heard her entering. There sitting at her table was the thing she loved most in the world sitting across from the thing she hated most."
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January 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YES!! Haha. This is awesome. Another fabulous idea that totally needs to be fleshed out and continued. Man, poor Kelly. I can tell she's gonna be the pain barer in your stories. Can't wait to see how she came to love Carrie and why she's still married to a douchebaggy wife beater. You can never have too many Kelly/Carrie stories no matter how dark the subject is.
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January 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
BIG, GIANT--QUESTION MARK!!!!!!