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for Baby Can I Hold You

by writer101

person ctallent
schedule June 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ha ha they should have known better than to say something in front of elle... great update....
person Violence
schedule June 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ROFLMAO. "Who knew grandma was a bitch?" I couldn't stop laughing at the for quite a while. Little kids are funny like that. WOOHOOOOOO!!!! Marriage proposal! You go get 'em stud. Please, please tell me this means we get an actual wedding scene even though hijinks will most likely ensue.
person ctallent
schedule June 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yay finally, that was was sweet and hilarious poor carrie... elle is the best...
person greens28
schedule June 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Glad they are taking a break from the world & brought their family along. Glad to see Kelly's father trying & the stabs at Jason's girlfriend were awesome. Loved it!!!
person Violence
schedule June 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hooker? More like drag queen, lol. Wow, we used to put makeup on my brother all the time... that explains a lot. The family thing with Elle is always cute as hell.
person ctallent
schedule June 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lol, elle is the best.... very sweet update...
person ctallent
schedule June 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hopefully this is the end of paul and the girls can go on and be in love now and raise their kids.... glad to see kelly is loving carrie more now....
person Violence
schedule June 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, so my reviews've been coming in sparadic movements lately because finals are kicking my ass. Carrie's such a gentleman in this story! How many people are completely willing to lure their girlfriend's husband into their room just to get the shit beaten out of them so they can send his ass to jail for sure? Whew. That's love right there. Beautiful and oddly sweet. And she even egged him on. That takes balls. I agree with Kelly, never let that crazy girl outta your sight again.
person Violence
schedule May 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You have no idea how happy it made me to see the title used in the fic. Straight up squeed. Even given the circumstances. I felt bad for Elle being shunned but it's for the best not to see Carrie looking like she got the shit beat outta her. Oh hell naw. No one gets to attempt rape on Carrie unless it involves Kelly and a safe word but then again you can't rape the willing can you? I hate that Carrie's the one beaten this time but then again, role reversal is nice.
person ctallent
schedule May 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
poor carrie, hope she wasnt raped. also hope this makes there relationship stronger and not worse....kudos to kelly