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for Baby Can I Hold You

by writer101

person Violence
schedule February 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Don't have much else to say except that was incredibly sweet and adorable... and almost sad when Elle asked why Kelly was so far away. That last line completely signified how the three of them were meant to be a family. ...wonder how Paul's doing... kidding.
person Violence
schedule February 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Damn. You really know how to drop a bombshell. Why the fuck would she be with Paul then if she was gay all along? Last ditch attempt at the hetero life? This just got so much more intense. I feel bad for Kelly though. She's all confused and frustrated. Really wanna know how '02 Kelly's so open and why she would keep it a secret. Or maybe she was just humoring Carrie. Or maybe her label made her hide it.
person Mo56
schedule February 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ah i totally called that! lol nice
person Violence
schedule February 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh man. This is hilarious. I was completely like what the fuck when Kelly said her and Ashley were a couple. Carrie's was all cute being jealous. Love Ashley's reaction to the idea of her and Kelly being together. It'll be good for Elle to finally see her mom after like two weeks but I don't know how she or Kelly will take it. Can't wait to find out. It keeps getting better and funnier.
person Mo56
schedule February 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WTF?!
person Mo56
schedule February 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this is heart breaking. but paul is gone now. so thats good
person Violence
schedule February 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Lol at Paul giving up so easily. I like that though. Hope he gets arrested and given the death sentence. It was cute that Jason told Elle Kelly's brain fell out. Completely funny. It would really suck if Kelly never remembered but then again it'd be like a fresh start because all the pain Paul caused would be gone and she's all Carrie's, no guilt. woohoo! Can't wait to see how Kelly reacts to Carrie, I'm so anxious. Just curious though, what year are we actually in?
person Mo56
schedule February 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i dont even know what to say...
person Violence
schedule February 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow. THAT was unexpected. Kelly with memory loss, damn. I feel that Ashley deserves a smack on the back of the head for not telling or at least hinting to someone sooner. Jason should definitely get the chance to sucker punch Paul a couple times, at the least. I think the doctor's a complete moron but if it keeps Paul away from Kelly I'm game. Kinda sad that she doesn't remember Carrie but her brain probably just reverted to her happiest time before her living nightmare as Paul's wife began. Mental block and all that. What about Elle? There's no way Carrie'll let her go with him. Carrie should totally screw what the doctor said and reintroduce herself into Kelly's life.
person Violence
schedule February 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
No!!!! Kelly, what the flying fuck are you doing!? You know that abusive husbands always come home early when they're not supposed to. And the next thing you know you're getting beaten with a baseball bat. Unbelievble. Carrie's a bit stupid for leaving Kelly by herself. Elle was all cute backing her bears. Hell, most of this chapter was sweet. You really need to update though 'cause I wanna know if Kelly makes it out alive. Here's to hoping Kelly and Carrie make it.