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Aw, damn. Done already. I really enjoyed it though. It was like a really long one-shot. I love where it ends. Kinda ironic too, since Kelly was all up in arms about the bands reaction and then come to find out they were all just waiting for it to happen. Too funny. Hope you decide to do another some day. More stories are always appreciated. Feeds the addiction more frequently, lol.

aww, it's over already? that's a major bummer. i think you did a great job with it, and i'm really glad you wrote it. it was a lot of fun to read, so thank you!

Freakin amazing story!!! I vote for long updates and more often.....i know i ask for much...sue me:P:P Great job:D:D:D

Oh boy... that was some fight. But I'm kinda glad it happened, the truth needed to come out even if it just furthered the fight. Loved this update and I can't wait for the second part.

dude. this fic rocks. but you gotttta update it sooner. i dunno if i can wait a whole other week for the next one, lol. i thought you did a fantastic job capturing the realism between them during this fight and how they were both TALKING but not really LISTENING to what the other one was saying, or taking it in and absorbing it. i think that is one of the biggest communication breakdowns that happens when emotions are high and reason is low, lol. but you did a great job of portraying that, especially when they first started interacting on the doorstep and kelly was pissed that carrie was all cheerful. i thought you captured the frustration and emotion of their fight pretty damn well, too, and it all felt very real. looks like we got a couple of stubborn passionate girls on our hands, eh? lol. should make for some hot make up sex once kelly gets over her fears. ;-) so yea, pretty much am super stoked on this fic and can't wait for more of it.

oh and about the length, don't even trip, I thought that was a great length for a chapter. but i am totally an impatient person and would rather have shorter chapters that are updated more frequently than super long chapters with a long time in between. at least thats my personal preference. but yea, LOVIN' IT!

so, i have to say, i'm not normally a fan of a lot of description, i'm a dialouge lover, but you write it really, really well. like, perfectly, cause it doesn't get boring or feel like it's dragging on at all which is really hard to do. and the kissing scenes...omg, hot much? lol, so yea, i vote you update this soon cause i absolutely love it.

Hot!!! u are doing a great job. I am really loving where U are taking this...very interesting. Update soon. Please?

Ahhhh!! Carrie you dumbass. What were you thinking? It seems as though I'm gonna have to keep my pimp hand strong with these two. But I don't believe Carrie would be that completely idotic and lie to Kelly. Sure, the girl has her moments but she's not THAT stupid... or is she? And to think I was uber excited that they were all makin out. Oh wait, sorry, I'm still happy about it. Just want Carrie to explain. That little bombshell only made me so much more anxious for the next update.

ok so i've been meaning to comment on this since you posted the first chapter. i am reallly really liking how this fic started out and how it is shaping up and i can't wait to see what you do with it. i think the AU aspect is totally fun and i am loving the image of carrie as a drummer. hot. i'm totally lovin the interaction between them and damn...you write their kissing really well. the only (minor) problem i had was trying to figure out which one of them was talking during some of their dialogue. but other than that, your descriptions are great, and their conversations are fun and i kinda liked how they both call each other by their last name. oh and i liked the way you traced the necklace and used it as a way to tie in the night with the days following, eventually leading up to kelly remembering what happened between them. i am really anxiously awaiting the next chapter and super curious about what happens when kelly confronts carrie about not telling her they slept together.

great chapters! loved em both.

LOOVE IT!!! Lol. Seriously great start. I'd say more, but I'm on my iPod, and I'm still trying to figure out how to use the damn thing. LOL. Anyways, I hope you update soon.