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for Right Kind Of Wrong

by writer101

person Violence
schedule July 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ROFLMFAO. Ashley and Kelly are the most lovable idiots EVER. I laughed so hard when they argued with hums over the Bond/Gadget themes. And then Carrie walked in and did it right the first time. Lol at Kelly's filter. WOOHOOOOOOO!! Carrie finally admitted it! That was beast. Seriously, it was awesome to move a step forward, at last. Oh yes, Carrie's completely in control of this situation and Kelly's already whipped. That date will be something wicked. Can't wait.
person ctallent
schedule July 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
alright, go kelly she is finally getting her date....kudos to carrie for finally admitting it...hopefully kelly will get her kiss next chapter
person Violence
schedule July 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Lmao. Ashley. She's the bestest. That last bit was amazing and funny. Kelly sat there wondering about her hair color the whole fucking time, xD. Oh don't worry Kelly, I'm sure you'll find out soon enough.
person Violence
schedule July 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Woohoo!!! We get the evil Carole again. Then again that was kinda obvious already from the fact that she sent her daughter to a fucking degaying doctor. I completely understand why Carrie had to cook up that bullshit story. Her mom can see the obvious infatuation Carrie has with Kelly so she's covering both of their asses. If not she'd prob be sent back to the doc, don't see how that could possibly happen though. Carrie's like 21/22 isn't she? Lol at combined Jeanne/Ashley teasing of Kelly. Hahah, Carrie just whipped out the heavy artillery.
person ctallent
schedule July 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh man, carrie is evil....lol poor kelly .... great update....
person Violence
schedule July 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Jesus. That was awkward. Gah, my sympathy wince goes to Kelly. Oh oh oh, Carrie's parents should TOTALLY meet Kelly's mom and Ashley. Hahah, that would be epic. I'm laughing in anticipation already. Woohoo for Carrie just being a damn fine actress. Kelly's definitely gonna win her over and Carrie's gonna let her. Oh yea.
person greens28
schedule June 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Still loving this fic. U are so talented at writing Carrie/Kelly. Great job.
person Violence
schedule June 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ahh yes the hair change that would mark the beginning of KC's peak era in pop culture. Lmao, I love that Ashley and Jeanne badger the shit outta Kelly while she's mentally telling them off. It's a great dynamic. The internal conflict she goes through and the fact that she openly lies yet they always see through her is amazingly awesome. Laughed pretty hard at the last line. If there's ever a Jeanne/Carrie meeting, it shall be epic.
person ctallent
schedule June 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yay go kelly, hopefully carrie wont wuss out on her....
person Violence
schedule June 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Jesus, Carrie's parents really did a number on her. Rofl, I loooove that Kelly's internally bashing Ashley. But I still love Ashley's snide remarks. 'I could rob a bank and we could go on the run...................' I bet she'd like that. Buh... wha... you can't leave it like that!? The truth finally comes out and you're leaving it there!??! That's almost cruel.