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Teehee!! He has magical headache removal powers. LOL. So, it's a cat and mouse game now. Briana knows what Brandon says is true, and he wants to show her what it's like to not have control. *shivers in anticipation* I can't wait until things really get going. I wonder if she is going to tell him about her backround? I'm sure he'll try and drag it out of her. Sneaky man for getting her out of work, and for finding out where she lives. So stoked about the dinner date. I wonder how far Brandon is going to push things. See, I've got all kinds of dirty things running through my mind...I'm pretty kinky. LOL. I wasn't expecting another update so soon, so yay!!!

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Yay!! I'm the cats pajamas!! LOL. That was good and steamy. Nice description of the lap dance. You know, I've never thought of Brandon as a domineering sort of person, he looks to be quiet and shy, although the quiet ones are always the freaks. LOL. I can't wait to read the next chapter tomorrow!! hurray!! I wonder if he will come back, or will he stay away and punish her? Hmmm, this is very intriguing, I'm on the edge of my seat here woman!! ^.^

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GAAAAHHH! You canNOT leave it there!! That is an evil evil evil cliffie!! I loved the beginning, very hot!! I like that sort of thing, though it seems to not be everyone's cup of tea. ^.^ This is a great start so far, and somehow, at the beginning of the story, once we started reading about Briana, and how she hated her life, and that she was moving to Hollywood, I had a strong feeling that she would be a stripper, well actually, prostitute, but that's only cause I have 'Pretty Woman' on the brain. LOL. I can't wait to read more!!

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ps - I've also got three chapters of a Pirates of the Caribbean story in my movies section if you're interested. ^.^