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holy crap, this is beautiful. I knew Syn was hot, but damn.

That was... amazing and hot. There aren't even words for it. Not even talking about the gorgeous mental image painted, but you have a way with words. You're able to draw it out, to make the reader feel the same torture ZV does. So often fanfiction goes the way of bad middle school essay writing, but you've nailed this. Another mark of your writing... it seemed almost... normal? Like, some fanfiction is so obviously fanfiction, but for some reason, yours was like, Hey, I could see this happening in some fucked up sort of way. Maybe it was because of how easy you wrote the band, how easy they were with each other in terms of teasing and bantering.

OMG that was soooooooooooooooooo HOTT!!!!

Wahahahaha! I was hoping you would post something like this ^_^ *Does a happy, happy dance* I loved it, Brian is damn sexy when he's talkin' dirty, lol =D