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October 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
utter awesomeness!
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September 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay we got our Zacky back!
I think the creep got off a little easy so Im gonna pretend
he gets raped in prison on a daily basis by a 350lb ex wrestler named Bubba.
Im sure deep down he'd want it that way.
Good luck with all the school stuff.
Cant wait til Nov.
I think any and everything you write is always worth the wait.
I think the creep got off a little easy so Im gonna pretend
he gets raped in prison on a daily basis by a 350lb ex wrestler named Bubba.
Im sure deep down he'd want it that way.
Good luck with all the school stuff.
Cant wait til Nov.
I think any and everything you write is always worth the wait.
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September 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That ending screams "SEQUEL!!", and I hope I'm right. You've written one of my new favorite fics staring Avenged Sevenfold, and for that I give you a big thank you hug and a cake shapped like the death bat.
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September 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Woah long lost sister,part of me feels like I should have seen that coming but oh well.I hope Zacky gets to be Zacky again soon.
Looking forward to the final chap.
Update soon.
Looking forward to the final chap.
Update soon.
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September 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Update again soon, I want to see if The Creep is going to get a hold of Raven/Zacky or if Amelia and her teacher will be able to fix things before something bad happens.
I love this story! It fuckin' rocks!
I love this story! It fuckin' rocks!
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September 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
FINALLY.Damn internet's been out for like a week.
Ok anyways good chapter.
But I hate cliffhangers...
so I need to know the fuck that guy is and WTF's going on here.
Im confused but I kinda like it.
Update Soon!
Ok anyways good chapter.
But I hate cliffhangers...
so I need to know the fuck that guy is and WTF's going on here.
Im confused but I kinda like it.
Update Soon!
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August 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wooo! Update again soon please, I want to see what's going to happen next, and my sister told me you reviewed Love Knows No Time but she deleted it because she said it was a negative review. I didn't get to read it because I was at a job interview, so I don't know how it could've been negative. Anyways, keep up the good fuckin' work and get another chapter out soon, this story has me hooked.
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August 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the advice. I kinda stopped describing the surroundings unless I really needed to0 after I had a review for a story on Fandomination (when it was still running) where the person told me I focused too much on surroundings and enough on the characters or plot, and it kinda stuck with me. I'll try to do more description in the chapters as they go, but like I said I had a job interview and I start work on Tuesday, so I haven't been focusing on my story much the last couple of days.
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August 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
FUCK!FUCK FUCK FUCK!
Okay I think you melted my brain with this chapter.
That was insanely hot.
It's a miracle Im still able to type.
Chocolate cake and chocolate ice cream with chocolate chips in it for everyone!
Man this was so awesome Im gonna break out the party hats
And the moon bounce.
Okay I think you melted my brain with this chapter.
That was insanely hot.
It's a miracle Im still able to type.
Chocolate cake and chocolate ice cream with chocolate chips in it for everyone!
Man this was so awesome Im gonna break out the party hats
And the moon bounce.
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August 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ok 1st: Yay Update.Glad everything's cool with your computer now.
2ndly: Holy shitballs it worked!
Haha Ive gotta bribe you more often.
How about some cake this time? *offers favorite cake*
The creepy dude is really starting to freak me out
and all I can say about the next chap is
3some 3some 3some
Ahhh!Cant wait.I seriously
spazzed a little bit when I saw you updated.
2ndly: Holy shitballs it worked!
Haha Ive gotta bribe you more often.
How about some cake this time? *offers favorite cake*
The creepy dude is really starting to freak me out
and all I can say about the next chap is
3some 3some 3some
Ahhh!Cant wait.I seriously
spazzed a little bit when I saw you updated.