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by theProphet

schedule January 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
(Have I already reviewed this? Shit... I don't remember... whatever, I'm doing it again!)

I -love- this story. It seems like so much fanfiction focuses on the physical aspects and this was just so psychological, delving so deep into both Kyo and Kaoru and how they're -both- affected by everything... Just beautiful. I love how everything grows and changes over time and there are -setbacks- in the progress they make, but they push through those together.

I think if this had ended at the original kitchen scene where Kyo first recognized Kaoru, I wouldn't have liked it quite as much, because it would just have been... too easy? I still would have enjoyed it, of course, but I don't think it would have been quite as striking for me. It's really only in the last couple chapters that my eyes really start to tear up, you know? I've already read the sequel, but that was a while ago, so I'm going to read it again ^_^

Hope to see more from you very soon!
person leppgirl
schedule July 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG how did I miss this, something made check on the other pages!
I was going to say that am going to miss this but since there WILL be a sequel. YAY!!!!
fantastic job as always. can't wait.
schedule July 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG THE END FINALLYYYYYYY deyhufgeshfjshegsbgjsgjhgs
CUTE.
person leppgirl
schedule July 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OH NO!...I'm gonna miss this story!!

So glad the Kyo is 'home' now but for how long, knowing you! LOL

okay don't make us wait long then ;-)
schedule June 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
whaaaa!! im confused?? i thought kyo was mad @ kaoru...now he buying him things 4 him lol im glad 2 c kyos attitude change 4 da better 2wards @ least kao ^o^v mayb kyos feelings will change further... hehehee thanks 4 da update ^_^v
person leppgirl
schedule June 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh that sneaky Kyo buying Kaoru a car!! LOL
don't worry I have no clue about cars either haha

Hmmm, is there feelings coming from Kyo for Kaoru?!?! I hope so :-)
schedule June 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I neeeed moooooore! xDD
person leppgirl
schedule June 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I hate when I get behind...I didn't have a computer for weeks, I went stir-crazy!!! haha



so from where I left off from...


oh I hate noisey neighbors!!!
so happy Kyo recongnizes Kaoru once again. my heart just hurts for him!

*****

I loved how you wrote Kyo's POV when he 'came back'

****

WOW 5 years since it all happened!!!

oh no KYO DON'T !!! whew thank goodness!!!

welllll now that that's over.....oh yea Happy Birthday Kyo!!

OH another party!!! haha

wait why was Kyo acting that way about Die and Toshiya's relationship, I thought Kyo was seeing a guy.
oh yea Happy Birthday Kaoru to you too!!

*******

okay I was right he was with a guy!
I'm so glad Kyo's on the road to recovery but.....you can't leave Kaoru.
oh shit, he's lost!!!...omg poor Kaoru can't leave the house just in case he came back.
oh thank goodness!!

okay now that I'm caught up, more...more...more!!!!! haha

schedule June 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
y kyo Y!! awwww i dont like kyos way of thinking -_-* y would he think such a way 2 a person who gave up 5 years!!! of their life 2 help bring him back!...poor kaoru...i mean he did get turned on @ 1st but he never did anything 2 kyos body but necessary things...kaoru went 2 sum bimbo prostitute bc he he wouldn't even think off using kyo dat way 4 his on pleasure ?=0 ... but i understand where kyo is also cuming from...but he needs 2 b a man and try 2 deal w/ it! thank u 4 da lovely update ;) keep them cuming!!
schedule May 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well, well, this is certainly getting interesting. I can understand Kyo's raging emotions at this point, even knowing that Kaoru took care of him for so long, it must be very difficult to accept after what he's gone through.

Don't worry about the time-skip either. It makes perfect sense. To be honest, I wouldn't want to read five more chapters of Kyo randomly recognizing Kaoru and then blanking out again anyway... and oooh, Kyo had a boyfriend? Kaoru's jealous! Haha. I'm really liking this, even though it's rather depressing. Fingers crossed for the old Kyo back! (Even though I know that he'll probably never be the same)

Great chapter, thanks a lot!

Sincerely,
~K. R. Ukido