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It's amazing how much research you seem to put into to this story, from dreadlock washing to GSA. And I love the slowly forming relationship between the twins. They're so cute, but believable.
It's great that you've toned down Koji's character and focused more on Bill and Tom. Make sure he doesn't go all Mary Sue on us ;)

Great story, please update soon. I think I'm actually in love with this fic <3

Well now, this looks suspiciously like progress. And did Koji just say 'Yay'? Because that kinda threw me through a loop.
We all know about precious baby Bill's insecurities. People whining all the time about how he looks too much like a girl, how his hair is rediculous, how his mole is ugly... all jealousy from the lips of spiteful witches who have less talent in their entire bodies than Bill does in his pinky finger. Gah, vanity and pride, makes me sick.
You keep putting food in here that makes me hungry. It's half past three in the morning for god's sake and I want to snack because you keep talking about food. Stop torturing me woman, for the love of all things Loki! XD
Hmm, kissing. Yummy, enough said on that. If I continue there will be keyboard smashing and unintelligible words. That leads to me making a fool of myself, so I will refrain XD AWESOMESAUCE! I await the next chapter with that minute trembling that comes before the inevitable screaming and begging XD JA!

Wow, I was really getting into that. All the characters are amazing, and the plot is fantastic. Please, please, please update this soon.
Oh, and if you have a mailing list, can you add me at: pinkbunniesrevil@hotmail.com

Oh tasty yummy stuff indeed. So here's where it starts to get down to it. I'm sure Koji is near bouncing aobut in excitement, or rather not. Too dignified for bouncing? It would seem so. Someone needs to tell Bill and Tom that smoking is a filthy habit. And not the sort of filthy habit I encourage either. Pumpkin risotto? Where do you get this stuff from XD It's like you're scanning menu's and plotting fanfiction at the same time. And the private Tommy-time session? Hawt o.o But then, we all knew that XD Tom and his five finger free time is a hit with me! Keep going, or you know I'll pout at you n.~

Hey hey, sorry I didn't review last time. Could have sworn I did. Obviously not if it's not here. One thing I noticed, you put down that Bill has fine black hairs on his arms and...other places perhaps. He's a natural blonde lol, he's a kitten with mixed fur XD I haven't seen Brokeback Mountain. You'd think I would have but I haven't. Cowboys, even gay cowboys really aren't my thing. Maybe you can get me to watch it when I visit? Who knows, tie me up I may co-operate XD

Boy-touching. Yes please. A world of yes please! They're touching and eating. That means they're becoming a little more comfortable. And the lotion thing >> I totally do that XD It's not even funny. But I'll never be able to look at it in the same light ever again!
Update soon, withdrawals are a bitch! Love ya!

Aiiii *tacklehugs you* If it were my fantasy, I'd be in Koji's shoes too. Hmm, nothing like a little roughing up to get the passion stirring. I feel so bad for Koji. Everything he said in this chapter drove his point home. His loneliness and pain. I'm developing Stockholm Syndrome and I'm not locked in an underground basement *grins* He's also very witty. Thumbs up for the sarcasm! I above all can appreciate that little trait. Sarcasm is my ambrosia XDDD

Part of me is being extremely impatient. I want to know what's going to happen and I want to know now. Fortunately, the side of my brain labeled common sense is telling the side of my brain labelled impulsive maniac, to calm the heck down and wait for the rest of the story. I need to know, but I also want the story to unfold at its own pace, a beautifully sculpted work of literature to tease my senses. And it's teasing quite well so far >>

Thankyou for the dedication my lovely. I am much appreciative! *snuggles* Impulsive brain wants more ><

Riveting storyline! Please continue!

I wanna cuddle somebody...*sobwail* Really really wanna!
My life's pretty much been on pause waiting for this. That reunion was beautiful. Kinda makes me wish I had a twin but then, I'd revoke that wish. I'm too annoying to be two people. The world would rebel.
Why is Koji so kickass? I mean really? Not that I approve of him choking our beloved dreadhead, although my inner sadist argues that the submission was hawt *grin* and it was, but still he never seems to lose it. He lost it more with Bill than he did with Tom. I thought it would be the other way around. I imagine that's only because he expected retaliation from Tom.
And speaking of our favourite guitarist, I love how vulnerable you made him in this chapter. I'm sure I've said before that I love it when Bill shows some backbone, so to see him protecting and comforting Tom, it makes me happy. And uncuddled...
Cuddles *grabby hands* I wants cuddles!

I just read part 3 of this enthralling story and of course, enjoyed it! Working in the security industry I can appeciate the in-depth description of use of weapons,armour and combat techniques decribed within, great stuff. This particular story would have lost my interest if it was just another typical fluffy story! Well written Rina! Your detail does you justice here!
What a way to appeal to the manly men.

Thanks
Darius

Very tantalizing dear!
How tempting that would be. He has to have so much control when looking over Bill, so pretty and tasty.