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Hey, RussianDoll here in my actual sign-in that I managed to sink my greedy claws into once again. I have the memory of a sieve, remembering passwords isn't a skill I'm well trained in, but, I digress! Fabulous chapter, absolutely bloody marvellous. You're characters are so in-depth. Each little personality trait you add makes me deconstuct and re-evaluate their personalities. Most people tend to make a character a two sided coin, one extreme or the other.

I'm completely smitten with this story, it's no secret. Tom's reaction to his surprise little phone call was exactly how I would imagine him reacting. Down to the letter. Tom strikes me as a person who likes to deal with problems personally, some might call it a hot-head attitude, react first and think later, but a situation he's practically helpless in? He's pretty much snared already. Had this happened the other way around and our mystery kidnapper had attempted to take Tom instead, this would be a completely different kettle of fish. Our kidnapper is intelligent. I'm guessing he already knows how it's all going to pan out...

I'm liking feisty Bill. You can't be a teenage rockstar without a little diva and some tantrums. This sudden backbone after he got over the initial shock of the kidnapping, well, you can't blame me for thinking it's sexy. Even Mr. Kidnapper (I just love calling him that) can't keep his hands off the little minx *grins* The anticipation is eating me alive! I'm a nosy little bitch, I have to know everything, and my curiosity is piqued! I can't wait for the next thrill...

I am thoroughly intrigued. I like alot of plot with my twincest *laughs* Usually it's just PWP, so you have successfully caught my interest.
You're extremely visual with your writing. I can see everything you describe in my head as I read, as if I'm in the room, watching the scene play out. It's something alot of people usually struggle with but you manage it flawlessly.
You've kept me wondering as well, I find myself asking questions.
Please update this soon, curiosity is my biggest weakness
I can't wait to see Tom's reaction...

I found the start of this story to be different from your other work that you have done in the past, very intriguing plot that will have anyone trying to guess the story direction! Well done. I can not wait for the second installment! Thank you for sharing your craft with others!